
11/25/2005 c1
19my dangerous angel baby
I love it. Nice twist too with her not drowning in the water. Great job!~

I love it. Nice twist too with her not drowning in the water. Great job!~
4/21/2003 c1
37Isthischaos
Wow! This is the first story I've read on here that had me hooked! I couldn't stop reading it! It's well written and well thought out!
Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read the next part!

Wow! This is the first story I've read on here that had me hooked! I couldn't stop reading it! It's well written and well thought out!
Keep up the good work, I can't wait to read the next part!
4/2/2003 c1
20Lise HEARTS Alan
This was good. And thanks for being supportive and reviewing my stuff. All these other bullshitters don't want to and wonder why I don't review their shit. Keep up the good work and holla at cha gurl.

This was good. And thanks for being supportive and reviewing my stuff. All these other bullshitters don't want to and wonder why I don't review their shit. Keep up the good work and holla at cha gurl.
4/2/2003 c1
1Keriana Williams
Oh, my, gosh. -Sniffle- That was sad! That was...Very good...I loved it!
I started reading it and couldn't stop, it was awesome! But SAD! So sad...-Sniffle-
I loved it quite a bit. Only problem I had was the constant cussing and general slang terms, but, it fits the story very well. After all, even *I* cuss -.-;;
Very good though! Loved it.

Oh, my, gosh. -Sniffle- That was sad! That was...Very good...I loved it!
I started reading it and couldn't stop, it was awesome! But SAD! So sad...-Sniffle-
I loved it quite a bit. Only problem I had was the constant cussing and general slang terms, but, it fits the story very well. After all, even *I* cuss -.-;;
Very good though! Loved it.
4/2/2003 c1
87Angel Of The Storms
I like this story i think it's very cool. Keep it coming.
Angel Of The Storms

I like this story i think it's very cool. Keep it coming.
Angel Of The Storms