for Dreamy Nature Words5/3/2004 c4 
2Avel
Wow, very nice poetry. Great job on these. Ranges from kinda creepy to beautiful. Awesome job.
~avlblu/acousticalferret/zlost
2AvelWow, very nice poetry. Great job on these. Ranges from kinda creepy to beautiful. Awesome job.
~avlblu/acousticalferret/zlost
1/22/2004 c5 Calista 'Narelle' Cameron
Millennium Slinky, Your poems are beautiful and very deep. I admire your skill and look forward to reading more in the future.
Millennium Slinky, Your poems are beautiful and very deep. I admire your skill and look forward to reading more in the future.
12/3/2003 c5 9Misty Woods
Ahh... I like this one best! Absolutely beautiful! I especially enjoyed the opening stanza. It was simply fantastic. Great work! :)
9Misty WoodsAhh... I like this one best! Absolutely beautiful! I especially enjoyed the opening stanza. It was simply fantastic. Great work! :)
12/3/2003 c2 Misty Woods
OK... Every stanza in this poem was written beautifully and once again, I liked your illustration of the tree as a king. The last stanza, however, was a bit too unexpected. Perhaps you could add a few lines before it to make the ideas more connected and flowing? :)
OK... Every stanza in this poem was written beautifully and once again, I liked your illustration of the tree as a king. The last stanza, however, was a bit too unexpected. Perhaps you could add a few lines before it to make the ideas more connected and flowing? :)
12/3/2003 c1 Misty Woods
This is an extremely great piece of work! I liked the different analogies you included. This poem is actually something like a Chinese myth. I wonder whether you've heard about it before? :)
This is an extremely great piece of work! I liked the different analogies you included. This poem is actually something like a Chinese myth. I wonder whether you've heard about it before? :)
8/18/2003 c3 Yoshi12
I liked the one before this. This one kind of confussed me, but I still liked it!
I liked the one before this. This one kind of confussed me, but I still liked it!
8/18/2003 c1 Yoshi12
I like this poem so much that I'm going to add it to my Favorite Stories list! :)
I like this poem so much that I'm going to add it to my Favorite Stories list! :)
7/1/2003 c3 3PeachPawz
Oh, beautiful! Please write poetry professionaly! Absolutely fantastic - full of detail and colour!
~Peach
3PeachPawzOh, beautiful! Please write poetry professionaly! Absolutely fantastic - full of detail and colour!
~Peach
5/31/2003 c1 4Digsa2003
OOh! It's really pretty, I think it's prettier when it doesn't rhyme, so don't worry about the rhyme scheme.
;)
Thanks for the reviem of my poem! =)
4Digsa2003OOh! It's really pretty, I think it's prettier when it doesn't rhyme, so don't worry about the rhyme scheme.
;)
Thanks for the reviem of my poem! =)
4/4/2003 c1 Kiri NoTenshi
*sigh* I want a sky cloak. . .
Prettyful, though, if not a little depressing. I wonder if the rain is ever tears of joy. Anyway, lovely imagery!
*sigh* I want a sky cloak. . .
Prettyful, though, if not a little depressing. I wonder if the rain is ever tears of joy. Anyway, lovely imagery!