for Experiences in my Subconscious II10/23/2003 c1 
19gellar the third
hahaha! this is so funny!~~this is so girly and it has no gore in it.
i knew youd hate this review...^_^
i noticed you use the line "i can see no more" alot...
lavender! ^_^^_^^_^^_^_^ crowded smileys
19gellar the thirdhahaha! this is so funny!~~this is so girly and it has no gore in it.
i knew youd hate this review...^_^
i noticed you use the line "i can see no more" alot...
lavender! ^_^^_^^_^^_^_^ crowded smileys
5/14/2003 c1 4Niph speaks
o.0 *more chills* I liked that... the victory is so sweet...yet so faint 'ere life departs... Do you always die in your dreams? -_^
4Niph speakso.0 *more chills* I liked that... the victory is so sweet...yet so faint 'ere life departs... Do you always die in your dreams? -_^
4/9/2003 c1 Elaine
a masterpiece! keep it up!
a masterpiece! keep it up!
4/4/2003 c1 19drtimphd
Yet another great story! xtrm might have actually had something there with the description of the creatures, but overall I think it is very good.
19drtimphdYet another great story! xtrm might have actually had something there with the description of the creatures, but overall I think it is very good.
4/4/2003 c1 25XtrM
I don't understand how you did it, but this story paints a very good picture, and not many adjectives were used. I bet you didn't proof it, because it seems a little repetetive in some words. A little more description in the "creatures" would help, too. But besides that it was grreat.
25XtrMI don't understand how you did it, but this story paints a very good picture, and not many adjectives were used. I bet you didn't proof it, because it seems a little repetetive in some words. A little more description in the "creatures" would help, too. But besides that it was grreat.
4/3/2003 c1 Jordy
Another GREAT work!
Another GREAT work!