for Dead sonnet11/17/2003 c1 
236mezzie
what i love about this is the animailian references you create in the first quartet, and reiterate in the end. it has an almost draconic sense of fiendishness that i like, the slinking wingedness, and the cruelly smiling pounce. also, i like that you make mention of grace, in the idea that there is a sense of terrifying litheness, smoothness, somewhere.
236mezziewhat i love about this is the animailian references you create in the first quartet, and reiterate in the end. it has an almost draconic sense of fiendishness that i like, the slinking wingedness, and the cruelly smiling pounce. also, i like that you make mention of grace, in the idea that there is a sense of terrifying litheness, smoothness, somewhere.
4/19/2003 c1 4SpikeSpiegelfan
You wrote that you were experimenting with your poems. I'd say it's workin. Keep it up
4SpikeSpiegelfanYou wrote that you were experimenting with your poems. I'd say it's workin. Keep it up
4/10/2003 c1 13tainted mind
death is cruelty yet death is love, a love of pain and hate..omg i love those lines...it's so true.i also see it as a means of gaining freedom.but hey...thats me.i dont think this is twisted..i love it.lol keep writing
13tainted minddeath is cruelty yet death is love, a love of pain and hate..omg i love those lines...it's so true.i also see it as a means of gaining freedom.but hey...thats me.i dont think this is twisted..i love it.lol keep writing
4/6/2003 c1 30Lioness Black
I know next to nothing about sonnets and what set them apart from other forms of poetry, but I can tell that this is beautiful. Dark and wonderful.
30Lioness BlackI know next to nothing about sonnets and what set them apart from other forms of poetry, but I can tell that this is beautiful. Dark and wonderful.
4/3/2003 c1 77Selene Rousseau
Death indeed is death...
I like this
I really like to read about this things!
Sounds weird right?
Cool and really breath taking!
KEEP WRITING!
77Selene RousseauDeath indeed is death...
I like this
I really like to read about this things!
Sounds weird right?
Cool and really breath taking!
KEEP WRITING!