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11/17/2003 c1 236mezzie
what i love about this is the animailian references you create in the first quartet, and reiterate in the end. it has an almost draconic sense of fiendishness that i like, the slinking wingedness, and the cruelly smiling pounce. also, i like that you make mention of grace, in the idea that there is a sense of terrifying litheness, smoothness, somewhere.
4/19/2003 c1 4SpikeSpiegelfan
You wrote that you were experimenting with your poems. I'd say it's workin. Keep it up
4/10/2003 c1 13tainted mind
death is cruelty yet death is love, a love of pain and hate..omg i love those lines...it's so true.i also see it as a means of gaining freedom.but hey...thats me.i dont think this is twisted..i love it.lol keep writing
4/6/2003 c1 30Lioness Black
I know next to nothing about sonnets and what set them apart from other forms of poetry, but I can tell that this is beautiful. Dark and wonderful.
4/3/2003 c1 77Selene Rousseau
Death indeed is death...

I like this

I really like to read about this things!

Sounds weird right?

Cool and really breath taking!


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