
6/7/2010 c6 Jaded Devil
I think this is one of my favourite stories that I've ever read on FictionPress! I love your characterizations. =)
I think this is one of my favourite stories that I've ever read on FictionPress! I love your characterizations. =)
4/15/2010 c6 drunkoffwooder
beautiful =]
beautiful =]
1/16/2010 c6 GEN
I just finished reading the whole story and I completely love it! Really hot and sweet with a dash of angst! It was just perfect! Keep writing, you're really great!
I just finished reading the whole story and I completely love it! Really hot and sweet with a dash of angst! It was just perfect! Keep writing, you're really great!
12/30/2009 c6
8LaDyCr0sS
lovely story! n_n though i wish the period when troy was confused and tried to leave connor was a bit longer(produces more feelings of angst! mwuahahaha!)...couldn't stop reading through to the end though...
the description was very nice, from the characters and their feelings, to the surroundings...one thing bothered me though,it was the interchange of the words "boy" and "man" in reference to connor...^_^'kinda confused my imagination (drawing him in my mind as a little bit mature-physically- when the term 'man' is used, and then he transforms into a younger looking character for the term 'boy').
great job nontheless! insta fav!

lovely story! n_n though i wish the period when troy was confused and tried to leave connor was a bit longer(produces more feelings of angst! mwuahahaha!)...couldn't stop reading through to the end though...
the description was very nice, from the characters and their feelings, to the surroundings...one thing bothered me though,it was the interchange of the words "boy" and "man" in reference to connor...^_^'kinda confused my imagination (drawing him in my mind as a little bit mature-physically- when the term 'man' is used, and then he transforms into a younger looking character for the term 'boy').
great job nontheless! insta fav!
12/28/2009 c1 luzifer
oh my god. i loved this story so much. it's been so long since i read something this good. i loved both their personalities. the ending was so heartwarming without bing mushy.
oh my god. i loved this story so much. it's been so long since i read something this good. i loved both their personalities. the ending was so heartwarming without bing mushy.
11/25/2008 c6
71Subbie
Aww... So sweet. I liked the last chapter, it's probably my favorite. And I also liked how you worked his stepfatehr into the story!
In chapter 4 when he was going to leave him I was like, NO! DAMNNIT! but then he came back, thank god...
LEe

Aww... So sweet. I liked the last chapter, it's probably my favorite. And I also liked how you worked his stepfatehr into the story!
In chapter 4 when he was going to leave him I was like, NO! DAMNNIT! but then he came back, thank god...
LEe
9/22/2008 c6
2sshsilence
this was the best, most cute thing EVER - Awesome -I completely love it. It was short, sweet and fabulous !

this was the best, most cute thing EVER - Awesome -I completely love it. It was short, sweet and fabulous !
7/23/2008 c6 lady-me
oh! so sweet and loveley
Connor is just so cute~
oh! so sweet and loveley
Connor is just so cute~
6/18/2008 c6 i-see-faeries
Aw, that was just awesome. The middle? end? of the third chapter nearly made me cry. I didn't like it though. I love happy endings, but the way that came around just kind of disappointed me. Pretty cliche. But other than that, I love this. Cute. :D
Aw, that was just awesome. The middle? end? of the third chapter nearly made me cry. I didn't like it though. I love happy endings, but the way that came around just kind of disappointed me. Pretty cliche. But other than that, I love this. Cute. :D
5/13/2008 c6 Tammsy
aw! CUTE! I love your characters!
Your story was soo good!
aw! CUTE! I love your characters!
Your story was soo good!