
3/19/2005 c6 Ailenat
i love this story, and i love you for writing this story
its sweet and beautiful. makes me want a lover like that
i love this story, and i love you for writing this story
its sweet and beautiful. makes me want a lover like that
2/17/2005 c5 r.mai
i was wondering when the issue of troy's numerous past affairs would come into play ... and that they did ... i'm glad the issue was resolved fairly quickly ... i felt so bad for connor. =_= okies, epilogue time!
i was wondering when the issue of troy's numerous past affairs would come into play ... and that they did ... i'm glad the issue was resolved fairly quickly ... i felt so bad for connor. =_= okies, epilogue time!
2/17/2005 c4 r.mai
whoo ... go troy! knight in shining armor to save a connor in distress. and connor's mom is a nice person. ^^ i imagined her differnetly. i felt a sense of satisfaction when troy hit evil homophobe dude. now to a life of newly weds eh? well sortal lol.
whoo ... go troy! knight in shining armor to save a connor in distress. and connor's mom is a nice person. ^^ i imagined her differnetly. i felt a sense of satisfaction when troy hit evil homophobe dude. now to a life of newly weds eh? well sortal lol.
2/17/2005 c3 r.mai
o.o and his mom still stays with such an abusive man? *gives connor a hug* another sweet chapter ... without the evil homophobe stepfather prowling about ... a cast? *winces* pain ... i hate pain...
o.o and his mom still stays with such an abusive man? *gives connor a hug* another sweet chapter ... without the evil homophobe stepfather prowling about ... a cast? *winces* pain ... i hate pain...
2/17/2005 c2 r.mai
well, i think his stepfather's gonna find out sooner or later. =x but this chapter was good. i enjoyed it. ^^ heh, as soon as i'm done with this story, i'll check out your other ones too.
well, i think his stepfather's gonna find out sooner or later. =x but this chapter was good. i enjoyed it. ^^ heh, as soon as i'm done with this story, i'll check out your other ones too.
2/17/2005 c1 r.mai
oh heheh. i like so far. =P sounds interesting and well ... i just like the way you phrase your words ... yup yup.
oh heheh. i like so far. =P sounds interesting and well ... i just like the way you phrase your words ... yup yup.
2/5/2005 c6
4Kakiryu
AW...I love it. It's so...so...I can't really describe it, but wow.
Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao.

AW...I love it. It's so...so...I can't really describe it, but wow.
Write more, write soon, just write. Ciao.
1/29/2005 c6 Monkeyland
OMG! OMG!OMG! You are a genius! This is brilliant! I loved it! You made me cry and then *smile amazingly happy! I loved the story!
OMG! OMG!OMG! You are a genius! This is brilliant! I loved it! You made me cry and then *smile amazingly happy! I loved the story!
12/27/2004 c6 Harajuku
It was beautiful, love. Truly beautiful. I never really fancied male slash as much as female, but I've been more into it lately. I've been trying to understand gay men more ever since my friend Kale came out of the closet. This story helps me understand.
It was beautiful, love. Truly beautiful. I never really fancied male slash as much as female, but I've been more into it lately. I've been trying to understand gay men more ever since my friend Kale came out of the closet. This story helps me understand.
11/14/2004 c5
8InsaneOleander
Great story and wonderful writing. I loved it.
I don't usually read slash stories, but this one was really interesting and the writing was amazing. Awesome job!

Great story and wonderful writing. I loved it.
I don't usually read slash stories, but this one was really interesting and the writing was amazing. Awesome job!
10/11/2004 c6 Katie
OH MY GOODNESS! You are such a fantastic writer! I cried when Troy 'left' Connor! I honestly had tears on my cheeks...couldn't believe it! But you made it all better! I haven't read a story this good in forever! You truly have a gift, I am sure all the people who read this story have been as captivated by your characters as I have! Keep up the writing. I am now off to go and read some of your other work! Loved the story!
OH MY GOODNESS! You are such a fantastic writer! I cried when Troy 'left' Connor! I honestly had tears on my cheeks...couldn't believe it! But you made it all better! I haven't read a story this good in forever! You truly have a gift, I am sure all the people who read this story have been as captivated by your characters as I have! Keep up the writing. I am now off to go and read some of your other work! Loved the story!
6/21/2004 c6
48MagzRL
There were a great deal of spelling errors, and I honestly believe he got off a little easy with the apology.
Otherwise, this was a very good story. The plot's been done many times in romance novels, but you managed to recreate it without making it too cliched. And the love scene details are very meticulous. Very great job!
Magz.

There were a great deal of spelling errors, and I honestly believe he got off a little easy with the apology.
Otherwise, this was a very good story. The plot's been done many times in romance novels, but you managed to recreate it without making it too cliched. And the love scene details are very meticulous. Very great job!
Magz.
6/13/2004 c6
5Crimsonoaks
Wow that was...beautiful. i was gonna write a story kinda like this but shorter for my friend, but i dont know whether to be inspired or to feel inferior after reading that. It put so much in a relatively small spot. I liked it very much, thank you for writing it.

Wow that was...beautiful. i was gonna write a story kinda like this but shorter for my friend, but i dont know whether to be inspired or to feel inferior after reading that. It put so much in a relatively small spot. I liked it very much, thank you for writing it.