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4/29/2004 c1 meagain
lucky jake...
6/10/2003 c1 26Kae Noel
gah, no don't stop there! ah!
5/29/2003 c1 jennifer
huh? i was reading the reviews... u dont switch povs... good, keep writing
5/19/2003 c1 43PainHateJusticeRaceAndLife
hehehehe...good job liz...good job.
4/29/2003 c1 jake wolf
hey, im readin all the stories that mention my name. u'd be surprised to no that in the ones with my name i always seem to be havin sex. watevr see ya,

jake wolf
4/28/2003 c1 8angel84forever
I NEED MORE NOW!
4/8/2003 c1 14CrimsonMisery
Now that was a cliff hanger, please continue soon. :oD
4/5/2003 c1 17Raeveyena
This is a flame.

Stick to one fucking point of view, okay? 3rd person or 1st person, one or the other, not both.

Work on your writing skills. They suck.

:)
4/4/2003 c1 2Cardinal Crab
wow.

gulp.

wow.
4/3/2003 c1 dutchess dreaming gypsy
um...that was new. i've read threesomes(once) but a foursome. all new to me. anyway, it was good, keep it up!

dutchess

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