for The Spider's Web6/8/2005 c17 
5forever in blue jeans
Whoa. This story is so different and awesome. I love it.
I love the Game Master. I need to know his name. I just do. So, you're going to update soon. Very soon.
5forever in blue jeansWhoa. This story is so different and awesome. I love it.
I love the Game Master. I need to know his name. I just do. So, you're going to update soon. Very soon.
6/8/2005 c17 Otabee Mox
Hello, yay! you updated! YES. i loved this chapter! im so glad that you're writing about PIRATES! i love pirates so much and i especially LOVED this chapter. it was great. the game master sounds so hot. anyways, hope you update son! i love this story.
Hello, yay! you updated! YES. i loved this chapter! im so glad that you're writing about PIRATES! i love pirates so much and i especially LOVED this chapter. it was great. the game master sounds so hot. anyways, hope you update son! i love this story.
6/8/2005 c17 Raging Libra
ok, i'm still reading this and i'm completely shocked that i actually remembered what happened since the last time i read this. you know this has to be good if i haven't forgotten! last time i read this was like...wow, can't remember...oh well. now, you do realize that with a cliffy like that you'll have to update within a month, right? i mean, really, you can't leave us hangin like THAT. anywayz, this was an awesome chapter. i really liked it. update as soon as you can! (preferably before i officially forget what happened :) )
ok, i'm still reading this and i'm completely shocked that i actually remembered what happened since the last time i read this. you know this has to be good if i haven't forgotten! last time i read this was like...wow, can't remember...oh well. now, you do realize that with a cliffy like that you'll have to update within a month, right? i mean, really, you can't leave us hangin like THAT. anywayz, this was an awesome chapter. i really liked it. update as soon as you can! (preferably before i officially forget what happened :) )
6/6/2005 c2 Suze
Oh wow, this story is f-ing amazing so far. You have serious talent. And the plot is mind-blowing. Reminds me vividly of Existenz, which was a great movie. Although I'm not that far into the story, I really do hope that the whole romance bit won't hinder the plot. It seems to serve its purpose by being an intriguing thread to the story, but hopefully won't make it cheesy or anything. I'm looking forward to reading the other chapters and will definitely review again when I'm done.
Keep up the good work.
Oh wow, this story is f-ing amazing so far. You have serious talent. And the plot is mind-blowing. Reminds me vividly of Existenz, which was a great movie. Although I'm not that far into the story, I really do hope that the whole romance bit won't hinder the plot. It seems to serve its purpose by being an intriguing thread to the story, but hopefully won't make it cheesy or anything. I'm looking forward to reading the other chapters and will definitely review again when I'm done.
Keep up the good work.
6/6/2005 c17 6twistedFAerieTALes
yay! i can finally add u to my favs! luv the story bundles, cant wait to see what you do next...btw, you BETTER get this published as soon as your done. update asap! ~Sage
6twistedFAerieTALesyay! i can finally add u to my favs! luv the story bundles, cant wait to see what you do next...btw, you BETTER get this published as soon as your done. update asap! ~Sage
6/6/2005 c17 xxcrimsonsoulxx
i love your story soo much ...omg!please update ASAP!
i love your story soo much ...omg!please update ASAP!
6/5/2005 c17 10Blade Griffin
Don't worry about your lack of postage, I must admit, I have stories its been longer then yours since I've updated... *coughs innocently*
10Blade GriffinDon't worry about your lack of postage, I must admit, I have stories its been longer then yours since I've updated... *coughs innocently*
6/5/2005 c17 1Psycho Parfait
... Oh my WOW. God.. that's like, the BEST story I think I've ever read. I don't know how I didn't find it before, haha!
You're so talented, and this is a very unique idea! I love it. I started squealing when Sydney kissed him back in this chappie.. hee! Finally!
Whatta cliffhanger. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Update soon!
1Psycho Parfait... Oh my WOW. God.. that's like, the BEST story I think I've ever read. I don't know how I didn't find it before, haha!
You're so talented, and this is a very unique idea! I love it. I started squealing when Sydney kissed him back in this chappie.. hee! Finally!
Whatta cliffhanger. I can't wait to find out what happens next! Update soon!
6/5/2005 c17 2Riddleraven
AH *bloodcurdling scream* Nu! *faints from the utter cliff-hanger* AGH! *collapses*
Amazing chapter! The best yet, I loved it. I can't believe it ended like that! @_@ I can't wait for the next one!
Isn't the GM a stalker or something? Because now... seriously... I don't even care. I think they should be together!
2RiddleravenAH *bloodcurdling scream* Nu! *faints from the utter cliff-hanger* AGH! *collapses*
Amazing chapter! The best yet, I loved it. I can't believe it ended like that! @_@ I can't wait for the next one!
Isn't the GM a stalker or something? Because now... seriously... I don't even care. I think they should be together!
6/5/2005 c17 4Slideshow
Woot. Where have you been?
I lub how you've never abandoned the story so far, no matter how long it takes you to update. Yes, woman, you rock.
This chapter was so awesomely long. It was very much exciting. I liked it a lot. All the action -noisy sigh-
Dom wasn't in this chapter at all, small disappointment, but the GM was! Hahah, dude, now you have totally messed up. I dunno whether to like Dom or the GM. This sucks.
I like how Sydney and Melissa are now friends! (Are they...?) That was very nice to read. And I simply loved how the guard knew what they were tryna pull off. Thats good. It wouldve been a bit predictable if he didnt, no? Man, you're awesome. HA!
Okay, I had this theory, that it would be funny if Dom didnt really like her at all, and was just about to say something else... like, "Sydney, i really like-mf" and instead it was uhh... "Sydney, I really like this game, but I have to go now." OR SOMETHING!
AHAHAHAH. Okay, I'm not too intelligent :( But yeah, the thought made me laugh haha. Cuz I'm so damn evil.
I know you prolly wont update until like, 43096430960543 years, which I dont mind, as long as you never ever stop, but yeah, I CANT WAIT.
I'd never ever, ever desert this story. Its one of the very few stories I read. I know I have a buttload of stories on my fav list, but I dont read them much anymore and I'm too lazy to delete, so...
Can't wait :).
Ohh, yeah. I added your cool ass to my hot AIM so I could stalk your or something weird, but dude, you're never on...
Of course, I'm not either because I dont like AIM, but... yeah... 'sok. I can wait for your cool ass some more.
Kay, good luck with the next chapter. See you there, eh?
Bam.
4SlideshowWoot. Where have you been?
I lub how you've never abandoned the story so far, no matter how long it takes you to update. Yes, woman, you rock.
This chapter was so awesomely long. It was very much exciting. I liked it a lot. All the action -noisy sigh-
Dom wasn't in this chapter at all, small disappointment, but the GM was! Hahah, dude, now you have totally messed up. I dunno whether to like Dom or the GM. This sucks.
I like how Sydney and Melissa are now friends! (Are they...?) That was very nice to read. And I simply loved how the guard knew what they were tryna pull off. Thats good. It wouldve been a bit predictable if he didnt, no? Man, you're awesome. HA!
Okay, I had this theory, that it would be funny if Dom didnt really like her at all, and was just about to say something else... like, "Sydney, i really like-mf" and instead it was uhh... "Sydney, I really like this game, but I have to go now." OR SOMETHING!
AHAHAHAH. Okay, I'm not too intelligent :( But yeah, the thought made me laugh haha. Cuz I'm so damn evil.
I know you prolly wont update until like, 43096430960543 years, which I dont mind, as long as you never ever stop, but yeah, I CANT WAIT.
I'd never ever, ever desert this story. Its one of the very few stories I read. I know I have a buttload of stories on my fav list, but I dont read them much anymore and I'm too lazy to delete, so...
Can't wait :).
Ohh, yeah. I added your cool ass to my hot AIM so I could stalk your or something weird, but dude, you're never on...
Of course, I'm not either because I dont like AIM, but... yeah... 'sok. I can wait for your cool ass some more.
Kay, good luck with the next chapter. See you there, eh?
Bam.
6/5/2005 c17 tickledblue
wow, welcome back! i'm glad you didn't abandon this story...it's freakin' awesome! anyway, update soon! please?
wow, welcome back! i'm glad you didn't abandon this story...it's freakin' awesome! anyway, update soon! please?
6/5/2005 c17 StarsignLeo
omg this is so great! wow. I'm glad you finally updated, and I can't wait for more!~Mel
omg this is so great! wow. I'm glad you finally updated, and I can't wait for more!~Mel
6/5/2005 c17 9Bleeding Air
My God, woman, you are amazing. This story is amazing. I absolutely love the plot and the Game Master. It's just wonderful.
And your writing style is just so addicting and well thought out. I mean, usually I like when authors have a balance between detail and dialogue, but you have a little more detail which sets an unbalance, but I love it even more!
I've been reading this story since you posted chapter nine, and even though the updates have been slow, they've been well worth it.
I loved the end of this chapter. Omigasp, they kissed. And it's about fricken time. Now I'm all psyched for the next chapter. I'm tempted to reread the story during the wait, but that will only make me more anxious for you to post more.
PS: I loved the last thing the GM said. "Don't be afraid to fall, my little raven, because you can fly." I mean, AW anyone? Then it's just hilarious 'cause he actually let her fall after he kissed her. Sweet of him, really. . . haha.
Actually. . . I think I am going to reread this story, since its been so long and my memory is a little foggy. Then, I'll come back and give you a better review.
9Bleeding AirMy God, woman, you are amazing. This story is amazing. I absolutely love the plot and the Game Master. It's just wonderful.
And your writing style is just so addicting and well thought out. I mean, usually I like when authors have a balance between detail and dialogue, but you have a little more detail which sets an unbalance, but I love it even more!
I've been reading this story since you posted chapter nine, and even though the updates have been slow, they've been well worth it.
I loved the end of this chapter. Omigasp, they kissed. And it's about fricken time. Now I'm all psyched for the next chapter. I'm tempted to reread the story during the wait, but that will only make me more anxious for you to post more.
PS: I loved the last thing the GM said. "Don't be afraid to fall, my little raven, because you can fly." I mean, AW anyone? Then it's just hilarious 'cause he actually let her fall after he kissed her. Sweet of him, really. . . haha.
Actually. . . I think I am going to reread this story, since its been so long and my memory is a little foggy. Then, I'll come back and give you a better review.
6/5/2005 c17 Uhm
Whee. That was good. Really good. I wonder how it would feel to fall like that o.O;
Whee. That was good. Really good. I wonder how it would feel to fall like that o.O;