for The Spider's Web7/24/2006 c5 Sweet Sarcasm
Hey. Rereading this story. I love how AGme Masters is so determined to get Syd. Anyways are you still alive? you haven't updated in ages. And if you are you should give us a little reminder that you are alive and with us.
Hey. Rereading this story. I love how AGme Masters is so determined to get Syd. Anyways are you still alive? you haven't updated in ages. And if you are you should give us a little reminder that you are alive and with us.
7/19/2006 c5 Qryous
Wah... STALKER STALKER! Geez... what's with that guy? He's not sane! I'm certain...^^"
Wah... STALKER STALKER! Geez... what's with that guy? He's not sane! I'm certain...^^"
7/10/2006 c18 
4bfoundwanting
I am absolutely enthralled by your story. This idea of being stuck in a virtual world, this boy who is obsessed with Sydney. The situation is tense and full of emotion. The sexual tension between Game Master and Sydney, the mystery of why he wants her and thinks her to be his savior... What is the de ja vu? Is he her stalker? So many questions and so many twists. I am entranced.
But I have noticed that you havn't updated about a year. I was wondering if you were planing to... If you wouldn't mind just sending me a quick email saying if you are planning to or not I would greatly appreaciate it!
4bfoundwantingI am absolutely enthralled by your story. This idea of being stuck in a virtual world, this boy who is obsessed with Sydney. The situation is tense and full of emotion. The sexual tension between Game Master and Sydney, the mystery of why he wants her and thinks her to be his savior... What is the de ja vu? Is he her stalker? So many questions and so many twists. I am entranced.
But I have noticed that you havn't updated about a year. I was wondering if you were planing to... If you wouldn't mind just sending me a quick email saying if you are planning to or not I would greatly appreaciate it!
7/6/2006 c18 5AshKing89
i really like it. keep going b'c i want to know who the game master is.cyaC.P.
5AshKing89i really like it. keep going b'c i want to know who the game master is.cyaC.P.
7/2/2006 c1 VioletMystery
Hi I just thought I'd tell you that I really like your series "The Spider's Web"(even though I don't like spiders). I was also wondering when you were going to update next and am hoping that it is soon. Keep up the good work!
Violet Mystery
Hi I just thought I'd tell you that I really like your series "The Spider's Web"(even though I don't like spiders). I was also wondering when you were going to update next and am hoping that it is soon. Keep up the good work!
Violet Mystery
6/29/2006 c18 emmy eleven
This is one of the best stories that I've read. You are truly an amazing author. It doesn't matter when you update, because I've come to love this story enough that even if it takes another year, I'm almost positive I'll be sitting in this exact position reading the latest, magnificent chapter.
This is one of the best stories that I've read. You are truly an amazing author. It doesn't matter when you update, because I've come to love this story enough that even if it takes another year, I'm almost positive I'll be sitting in this exact position reading the latest, magnificent chapter.
6/20/2006 c18 Mephistophelian
I just wanted to review because, after reading your profile, I think that you definately deserve some encouragement. I guess I should start by saying that I stayed up until four in the morning reading this, and that I absolutely love it.
I honestly don't think that you should worry about people accusing you of plagarising. You aren't. NOTHING IS ORIGIONAL ANYMORE. people rip eachother off ALL THE TIME. Even Pablo Piccasso said "lesser artists borrow. Greater artists steal". I believe that you've 'stolen' wonderfuly, made this story completely your own, and if you say that you didn't steal the plot, than I believe you. Taking inspiration from a work is completely different than taking actual text from a work. So far as I can tell, there's no 'cut and paste' here.
Personally, having seen and loved Labarynth, I didn't even realize any similarity until you mentioned it. Reading the summary, I thought it was going to be similar to an anime called .hack/SIGN, but aside from the virtual reality it's nothing like it. I think that this story is wonderfuly inspired and origional.
This review is getting amazingly long, so I suppose that I should wrap it up. I think that you are doing a wonderful job. Your story is amazingly popular, and the unfortunate downside of that popularity is people flaming you and wanting to make you doubt yourself. YOU CAN RISE ABOVE THIS. Who cares what they think? What right do they have to question your creative genius?
I think you're an incredibly strong person. Keep up the good work.
-Mephistophelian
I just wanted to review because, after reading your profile, I think that you definately deserve some encouragement. I guess I should start by saying that I stayed up until four in the morning reading this, and that I absolutely love it.
I honestly don't think that you should worry about people accusing you of plagarising. You aren't. NOTHING IS ORIGIONAL ANYMORE. people rip eachother off ALL THE TIME. Even Pablo Piccasso said "lesser artists borrow. Greater artists steal". I believe that you've 'stolen' wonderfuly, made this story completely your own, and if you say that you didn't steal the plot, than I believe you. Taking inspiration from a work is completely different than taking actual text from a work. So far as I can tell, there's no 'cut and paste' here.
Personally, having seen and loved Labarynth, I didn't even realize any similarity until you mentioned it. Reading the summary, I thought it was going to be similar to an anime called .hack/SIGN, but aside from the virtual reality it's nothing like it. I think that this story is wonderfuly inspired and origional.
This review is getting amazingly long, so I suppose that I should wrap it up. I think that you are doing a wonderful job. Your story is amazingly popular, and the unfortunate downside of that popularity is people flaming you and wanting to make you doubt yourself. YOU CAN RISE ABOVE THIS. Who cares what they think? What right do they have to question your creative genius?
I think you're an incredibly strong person. Keep up the good work.
-Mephistophelian
5/7/2006 c16 10cherrypiesizzle
Wow. I don't get where this story is going...or what the Game Master is DOING, what his motivation towards Sydney is, or even what his stupid name is! But, that's the whole reason this story has me so intrigued, staring at the computer screen and going half-blind in the process. Wow. I feel like I want to suck up every word that you write, that's how amazing your writing is. Heh. Know that I read this story yet AGAIN and reviewed yet AGAIN when I was supposed to be doing my homework. Feel special. And from the sheer amount of reviews you have gotten, I'd say other people recognize your talent as well. So, why haven't you updated, you skank? DOn't you know that you have amazing skill, and, well, at first I thought the Game Master was just infatuated with Sidney bt now I think he loves her. About how he does, only god knows. I mean, he barely knows her, but maybe underneath all that possessive crap there's that real, gentle, understanding, caring love. Well I hope so anyway. That would be such a waste if he didn't, I mean, he CAN'T harm Dom only because he has feelings for her! And, you have to admit, Sidney came onto him first. So, I am hoping he isn't so cruel, or else I will hate him forever (and you too). If he is cruel, I'm sure my girl Sidney will teach him a lesson. Give him a good whacking, anyhow.
PLEASE UPDATE YOUR AMAZING STORY SOON! (long review...just shows how much your story affected me. Now I shall put it on my fav's. You should check out my list by the way, it's really awesome and a lot of the stories are already completed so you don't have to worry about the authors discontinuing it or not updating for a long time like a CERTAIN person I see here *cough*)
;p
10cherrypiesizzleWow. I don't get where this story is going...or what the Game Master is DOING, what his motivation towards Sydney is, or even what his stupid name is! But, that's the whole reason this story has me so intrigued, staring at the computer screen and going half-blind in the process. Wow. I feel like I want to suck up every word that you write, that's how amazing your writing is. Heh. Know that I read this story yet AGAIN and reviewed yet AGAIN when I was supposed to be doing my homework. Feel special. And from the sheer amount of reviews you have gotten, I'd say other people recognize your talent as well. So, why haven't you updated, you skank? DOn't you know that you have amazing skill, and, well, at first I thought the Game Master was just infatuated with Sidney bt now I think he loves her. About how he does, only god knows. I mean, he barely knows her, but maybe underneath all that possessive crap there's that real, gentle, understanding, caring love. Well I hope so anyway. That would be such a waste if he didn't, I mean, he CAN'T harm Dom only because he has feelings for her! And, you have to admit, Sidney came onto him first. So, I am hoping he isn't so cruel, or else I will hate him forever (and you too). If he is cruel, I'm sure my girl Sidney will teach him a lesson. Give him a good whacking, anyhow.
PLEASE UPDATE YOUR AMAZING STORY SOON! (long review...just shows how much your story affected me. Now I shall put it on my fav's. You should check out my list by the way, it's really awesome and a lot of the stories are already completed so you don't have to worry about the authors discontinuing it or not updating for a long time like a CERTAIN person I see here *cough*)
;p
5/4/2006 c1 TheQueenofCliche
Matches, how you doin. Dood, I miss yo story, like whoa. No, this is not the point of my review, but I just wanted to say that:)
I just read your profile actually, and I decided to do my bit for you because whoever mentioned that this story is similar to Sweet Valley High is a tripped out douche bag.
Your efforts for this story have been spectacular, and not once would I associate the word DITZY with SW, because Sweet Valley High is just that; ditzy, superficial, overrated, etc.
I dont know about the other story you mentioned, but either way, similar or not, this story is wonderful.
I'm sorry you've been hasseled and accused of stealing other people's work. That's just not fun. But I hope they havent slaughtered any means of your enthusiasm for writing SW, because that would suck. Mhm. Hahaha.
Anyway, I back you up 101%.
You are the shit, Matches.
Matches, how you doin. Dood, I miss yo story, like whoa. No, this is not the point of my review, but I just wanted to say that:)
I just read your profile actually, and I decided to do my bit for you because whoever mentioned that this story is similar to Sweet Valley High is a tripped out douche bag.
Your efforts for this story have been spectacular, and not once would I associate the word DITZY with SW, because Sweet Valley High is just that; ditzy, superficial, overrated, etc.
I dont know about the other story you mentioned, but either way, similar or not, this story is wonderful.
I'm sorry you've been hasseled and accused of stealing other people's work. That's just not fun. But I hope they havent slaughtered any means of your enthusiasm for writing SW, because that would suck. Mhm. Hahaha.
Anyway, I back you up 101%.
You are the shit, Matches.
4/15/2006 c18 Purple Eclipse
I don't understand why anyone would flame you for your story. I haven't read anything like it on FictionPress before. As for it being like anything else, that does sometimes happen, but not because you stole another author's ideas, but because everything's been done before. Your characters are your own. Your plot is your own. How the story ends is your own. The premise may have been done before, but what you are doing with your characters hasn't been done before.
Don't let one rotten ANONYMOUS review spoil writing for you. This is a fun, entertaining and all around good story. One of the better ones on FictionPress! You've really made me feel for your characters. Sydney and the Game Master are quite believable and there are so many unanswered questions about them both that I would love to have answered. Even if you aren't going to post the rest of the story on FictionPress, I'd still like to read it. You are a talented writer and I beg you to finish The Spider's Web!
I don't understand why anyone would flame you for your story. I haven't read anything like it on FictionPress before. As for it being like anything else, that does sometimes happen, but not because you stole another author's ideas, but because everything's been done before. Your characters are your own. Your plot is your own. How the story ends is your own. The premise may have been done before, but what you are doing with your characters hasn't been done before.
Don't let one rotten ANONYMOUS review spoil writing for you. This is a fun, entertaining and all around good story. One of the better ones on FictionPress! You've really made me feel for your characters. Sydney and the Game Master are quite believable and there are so many unanswered questions about them both that I would love to have answered. Even if you aren't going to post the rest of the story on FictionPress, I'd still like to read it. You are a talented writer and I beg you to finish The Spider's Web!
4/14/2006 c1 Catatonic Moronic
This story kicks ass! I need, need, NEED to know how it ends! If you won't continue it for me, think of the children...they need you to finish it, too!
This story kicks ass! I need, need, NEED to know how it ends! If you won't continue it for me, think of the children...they need you to finish it, too!
4/10/2006 c18 K
Please UPDATE!
Please UPDATE!