
6/25/2017 c20
5ramblingrobin
This story is amazing. I'm totally enthralled. I can't wait to see what will happen next! Xoxo Robin

This story is amazing. I'm totally enthralled. I can't wait to see what will happen next! Xoxo Robin
7/25/2011 c11
4checkerboardom
I love this story first off. Second: For the life of me I can't remember the name of the song that is in the beginning of this chapter! Please, can you tell me cuz I wanna listen to it.

I love this story first off. Second: For the life of me I can't remember the name of the song that is in the beginning of this chapter! Please, can you tell me cuz I wanna listen to it.
12/31/2010 c20 TheReviewer
Too bad you gave up on this...
It was getting so good!
Too bad you gave up on this...
It was getting so good!
2/27/2010 c20 pfannkucken
OHMIGOD what happens next?
that is NOT a good place for a cliffhanger
seriously
OHMIGOD what happens next?
that is NOT a good place for a cliffhanger
seriously
2/24/2010 c3 pfannkucken
ok
i'm marking my spot so i can come back and finish it
it's good so far!
REALLY sad.
but good
ok
i'm marking my spot so i can come back and finish it
it's good so far!
REALLY sad.
but good
12/29/2009 c20
2Phoenex360
=O WOW! This is a great story! Your grammar is a bit off and the flow is a bit unprofessional, but all in all this is a great story. :) I want to know what happens next and I wish you would update soon because that can't be the ending! And you don't want to abandon a story you've worked this hard on. ;)
*gives you cookies* Keep writing!

=O WOW! This is a great story! Your grammar is a bit off and the flow is a bit unprofessional, but all in all this is a great story. :) I want to know what happens next and I wish you would update soon because that can't be the ending! And you don't want to abandon a story you've worked this hard on. ;)
*gives you cookies* Keep writing!
3/3/2009 c20 uniqueindividual
That really is sad. If Mike wasn't in jail, then he would have seen the "marks of the trade".
That really is sad. If Mike wasn't in jail, then he would have seen the "marks of the trade".
3/2/2009 c15 uniqueindividual
It is like a really twisted Romeo and Juliet story...really twisted...like mutated almost beyond recognition. But still great!
It is like a really twisted Romeo and Juliet story...really twisted...like mutated almost beyond recognition. But still great!