for Destiny Forgotten8/31/2005 c3 
13Silver Blue Phoenix
Wow! I love your story! I can't believe you haven't updated in over two years! I really wish you would continue this story, it really is one of the best I've ever read. I also want to know who is which guardian. So please, for he sake of my curiosity, please continue this story! I really want to see what happens!
13Silver Blue PhoenixWow! I love your story! I can't believe you haven't updated in over two years! I really wish you would continue this story, it really is one of the best I've ever read. I also want to know who is which guardian. So please, for he sake of my curiosity, please continue this story! I really want to see what happens!
2/13/2005 c3 21Nemesis25
I loved it. It's a really interesting story and I want to know more about the characters. The dialogue and the action is very good too. Please continue, I'd like to see where this is going.
21Nemesis25I loved it. It's a really interesting story and I want to know more about the characters. The dialogue and the action is very good too. Please continue, I'd like to see where this is going.
8/22/2003 c1 kendogal
Hi there Klissie-chan! I love the story so far! It's cool how you changed it a bit. I can't wait till you post more of the story^_^
okies then,
bye bye!
Hi there Klissie-chan! I love the story so far! It's cool how you changed it a bit. I can't wait till you post more of the story^_^
okies then,
bye bye!
8/14/2003 c3 FlamesheRuby
YO! YO! CHECK IT OUT! I'M BAA~CK~! ^_^
Newayz, cool fic here! I've uploaded chapter 3 and you haven't with the stupid monkey yet? :P Well, can't blame yeh now, can i? (talks Hagrid style) hope you drop by to read and do continue ur fic! ^_^
YO! YO! CHECK IT OUT! I'M BAA~CK~! ^_^
Newayz, cool fic here! I've uploaded chapter 3 and you haven't with the stupid monkey yet? :P Well, can't blame yeh now, can i? (talks Hagrid style) hope you drop by to read and do continue ur fic! ^_^
8/4/2003 c2 Gaurdian of wind
...wait I think I just wrote for the wrong chapter... GOMEN NASAI! I meant to write that this part was well written ... GOMEN NASAI!(Im sorry) and yeah! make me bleed a whole lot! Let me get my @$$ kicked by a lot of people k?
...wait I think I just wrote for the wrong chapter... GOMEN NASAI! I meant to write that this part was well written ... GOMEN NASAI!(Im sorry) and yeah! make me bleed a whole lot! Let me get my @$$ kicked by a lot of people k?
8/4/2003 c1 Gaurdian of wind
Hey this part wasn't in the book right? hehehehehehe this part is cool and well made out :} well are you gonna give us all the story when you publish right?
Hey this part wasn't in the book right? hehehehehehe this part is cool and well made out :} well are you gonna give us all the story when you publish right?
8/4/2003 c3 Gaurdian of Wind
Hey Heather! this is the guardian of wind talking! I love your story! even if you let us read it at skool but its cooler now that you ...you know improved it for the internet and stuf... so! I hope you add me and Sora in soon! Sora: yeah!1 get me out of this God forsaken tube now!...Me and Kali want our gaurdians! (Yes! and Im having a very bad day and my spelling is off a lot so sue me!)
Hey Heather! this is the guardian of wind talking! I love your story! even if you let us read it at skool but its cooler now that you ...you know improved it for the internet and stuf... so! I hope you add me and Sora in soon! Sora: yeah!1 get me out of this God forsaken tube now!...Me and Kali want our gaurdians! (Yes! and Im having a very bad day and my spelling is off a lot so sue me!)
7/30/2003 c3 Demon of the Flame
Wow!
This is such a good story. Every thing is in such good detail. You must have thought about this story for a long time to get everything this good. I mean wow! The chapter was very long but it kept me bussy. ^-^ This story is so cool. Keep it up.
Wow!
This is such a good story. Every thing is in such good detail. You must have thought about this story for a long time to get everything this good. I mean wow! The chapter was very long but it kept me bussy. ^-^ This story is so cool. Keep it up.
7/18/2003 c3 9Magentian
Hmm... I'm pretty impressed! Very exciting start to this little project of yours, but it did get rather long, which was intimidating. And I'm still a bit confused... I don't think much of the storyline stuck in my head at all. Ah, well... I suppose if I read it over, I'll get it. Anyway, good start, I'm very glad that you decided to make a more lengthy debut on FP at last, as I do spend most of my time here... Please update quickly, I'll be waiting! ^_^
9MagentianHmm... I'm pretty impressed! Very exciting start to this little project of yours, but it did get rather long, which was intimidating. And I'm still a bit confused... I don't think much of the storyline stuck in my head at all. Ah, well... I suppose if I read it over, I'll get it. Anyway, good start, I'm very glad that you decided to make a more lengthy debut on FP at last, as I do spend most of my time here... Please update quickly, I'll be waiting! ^_^
7/18/2003 c3 15Isay
Very interesting. ^_^
The first two chapters were a little too short... but the third was okay (but maybe you could have broken it down to two chapters?)
Nice story...
~Isay
15IsayVery interesting. ^_^
The first two chapters were a little too short... but the third was okay (but maybe you could have broken it down to two chapters?)
Nice story...
~Isay
7/16/2003 c3 anna
awesome! you rock heather!
awesome! you rock heather!
7/11/2003 c3 Shizaaa
Well you know wut i said to you personally about this so i dont have to repeat myself but heres the review cya
Well you know wut i said to you personally about this so i dont have to repeat myself but heres the review cya
7/11/2003 c2 Shizaaa
Finally this answers a lot of the questions i had but i wont ask lol wut did i mean by that last sentence o well i gtg bye bye
Finally this answers a lot of the questions i had but i wont ask lol wut did i mean by that last sentence o well i gtg bye bye