for Snowstorm1/3/2006 c1 
7Teufel66
WOW! this poem is amazing, absolutely powerful use of imagery and vocabulary. so good, i think this will be the first occupant of my favourite list. you should definitely write poems more often!
7Teufel66WOW! this poem is amazing, absolutely powerful use of imagery and vocabulary. so good, i think this will be the first occupant of my favourite list. you should definitely write poems more often!
10/25/2005 c1 22marinawings
very nice. it's been getting colder where i live, so i think this poem is pretty relevant to me right now. beautiful descriptions.
22marinawingsvery nice. it's been getting colder where i live, so i think this poem is pretty relevant to me right now. beautiful descriptions.
10/18/2005 c1 Angharad Gwynedd
*shivers* Br. I live in Western New York about an hour or so from Chautauqua Institution (despite my Welsh ancestry), so naturally we get a lot of lake-effect snow from Lake Erie. You captured the image of a snowstorm beautifully!
Btw, when are you posting MR6? That's like, the only reason I'm on here today.
*shivers* Br. I live in Western New York about an hour or so from Chautauqua Institution (despite my Welsh ancestry), so naturally we get a lot of lake-effect snow from Lake Erie. You captured the image of a snowstorm beautifully!
Btw, when are you posting MR6? That's like, the only reason I'm on here today.
5/10/2005 c1 4Horizon Passage
Beautiful poem. I love the word choice. Fabulous! PS~ Thanks for reviewing my story again!
4Horizon PassageBeautiful poem. I love the word choice. Fabulous! PS~ Thanks for reviewing my story again!
3/13/2005 c1 73aims80
I like it. I have never been able to write poetry, even if I try. :)
BTW- I've fixed up the stuff with Jenny I was planning to so if you get the chance let me know what you think of the changes? I tried to convey a friendship between Angus and Jenny before they declared their love for each other.
73aims80I like it. I have never been able to write poetry, even if I try. :)
BTW- I've fixed up the stuff with Jenny I was planning to so if you get the chance let me know what you think of the changes? I tried to convey a friendship between Angus and Jenny before they declared their love for each other.
3/2/2005 c1 ZILENABLACK
Good poem i think you capture a dark mood very well
keep writing poems
Good poem i think you capture a dark mood very well
keep writing poems
2/20/2004 c1 Stephen Fierce Publications
Reminds me of the book " Brian's Winter". Very nice. Please review my stuff.
Reminds me of the book " Brian's Winter". Very nice. Please review my stuff.
11/18/2003 c1 8Soleil Antoinette
Interesting - you have captured the look of snow... the mood dark... I usually see snow as uplifting and powerful, but nice interpretation here. Keep on writing!
8Soleil AntoinetteInteresting - you have captured the look of snow... the mood dark... I usually see snow as uplifting and powerful, but nice interpretation here. Keep on writing!
10/5/2003 c1 8CraigAPrice
That was a great first try for a poem. I never write poems either so I can't tell how good it is, but at least i thought it was pretty good.
8CraigAPriceThat was a great first try for a poem. I never write poems either so I can't tell how good it is, but at least i thought it was pretty good.
7/18/2003 c1 9JBJ 18
This is pretty damn good for your first try at poetry, a 100 times better than my sad attempts. It's very descriptive I can really visualize what your saying
9JBJ 18This is pretty damn good for your first try at poetry, a 100 times better than my sad attempts. It's very descriptive I can really visualize what your saying
6/28/2003 c1 tzncz
Are you sure you know nothing about poetry? Really? Well. I reckon this is brillant for an "amateur". It's so descriptive! Keep writing, please!
Are you sure you know nothing about poetry? Really? Well. I reckon this is brillant for an "amateur". It's so descriptive! Keep writing, please!
6/3/2003 c1 2Mystified
Very nicely done. The descriptions were fantastic... now I'm going to have to get a blanket because I'm all cold. = ) Great poem!
2MystifiedVery nicely done. The descriptions were fantastic... now I'm going to have to get a blanket because I'm all cold. = ) Great poem!
5/12/2003 c1 Sailor Chibi Moon
Wow! That was really good! I wish I could write as good as you! Keep up the good work! ^_^
P.S.- I also wanted to thank you for reviewing my story, and no, there aren't going to be anymore chapters. Sorry! It was very hard to decide weather to end it how it was, or keep on going, and it made more sence to leave it the way it is. I guess I wrote it the way I did so the reader can let their imagination take over from where I left off. Thanks alot! ^_^
Wow! That was really good! I wish I could write as good as you! Keep up the good work! ^_^
P.S.- I also wanted to thank you for reviewing my story, and no, there aren't going to be anymore chapters. Sorry! It was very hard to decide weather to end it how it was, or keep on going, and it made more sence to leave it the way it is. I guess I wrote it the way I did so the reader can let their imagination take over from where I left off. Thanks alot! ^_^