for What if it Never Stopped Raining?9/22/2005 c1 
11tazzwolf
So beautiful! I like the rain, but that is personal oppinion. Good use of 2nd and 4th line rhyming.
11tazzwolfSo beautiful! I like the rain, but that is personal oppinion. Good use of 2nd and 4th line rhyming.
6/2/2003 c1 12All Mighty Terrestrial
Wonderful job, as always. Though I can't picture YOU ever feeling down because of the rain. You'd be out there telling people about the sun for as long as necessary. Keep writing more! PLEASE!
12All Mighty TerrestrialWonderful job, as always. Though I can't picture YOU ever feeling down because of the rain. You'd be out there telling people about the sun for as long as necessary. Keep writing more! PLEASE!
5/1/2003 c1 12Poetic Breakdown
ACK! This poem reminds me of that song! "I'm addicted to you"! HOW CAN I NOT BE ADDICTED TO YOUR POETRY? THIS IS SO AWESOME! *puts it on faves*
12Poetic BreakdownACK! This poem reminds me of that song! "I'm addicted to you"! HOW CAN I NOT BE ADDICTED TO YOUR POETRY? THIS IS SO AWESOME! *puts it on faves*
4/23/2003 c1 Elle
LILS! this is so wonderful! *grumble* and you say that *I* am talented! this is really really good! Well done! I'm off to read the others! :)
LILS! this is so wonderful! *grumble* and you say that *I* am talented! this is really really good! Well done! I'm off to read the others! :)
4/7/2003 c1 Frodo
Wow... very well done. I really love this. Most rhyming here usually doesn't work so well or just seems... I dunno... not right... but yours is fantastic. The symbalism in this piece is great. (atleast, I think there's symbalism in it... well, if you didn't mean it to be, I certanitly am interpreting it that way) Good work. Keep it coming.
-Frodo
Wow... very well done. I really love this. Most rhyming here usually doesn't work so well or just seems... I dunno... not right... but yours is fantastic. The symbalism in this piece is great. (atleast, I think there's symbalism in it... well, if you didn't mean it to be, I certanitly am interpreting it that way) Good work. Keep it coming.
-Frodo