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4/8/2003 c1 7Aphrodite's Apple
Great start, I feel so sad for Toby! I wonder where his parents are, poor little Toby.

hehehe, it sounds a little strange that I'm talking about him like a real person! I guess thats a compliment, that your charector seems so believable (and it makes me sound less crazy too). So I'll go with that ^.^

Keep writing, I can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon, pretty please?

~darkmoon-on-dragonwings~
4/7/2003 c1 Rainee2
Wow... I like it. Strange it made me think, there are families out there like that and kids who go thorugh things like that. What inspired you to write that?

~Rainee

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