for To Save a Kingdom4/18/2003 c7 LPScissorhands
this is great! keep writing, i look forward to reading more, i plan on looking to see if yuv written more at least once a day. that's how much i enjoy it :)
this is great! keep writing, i look forward to reading more, i plan on looking to see if yuv written more at least once a day. that's how much i enjoy it :)
4/17/2003 c6 
15LiNdSaY.AP
very very good! I adore your style of writing. It's awesome. Your plot kicks some serious butt and I can't wait to hear more! Contact me to let me know when ther's more!
15LiNdSaY.APvery very good! I adore your style of writing. It's awesome. Your plot kicks some serious butt and I can't wait to hear more! Contact me to let me know when ther's more!
4/17/2003 c6 6Estelle Stafford
I love it, I can't wait to see what is next. Update soon please. Please. Please. Please.
6Estelle StaffordI love it, I can't wait to see what is next. Update soon please. Please. Please. Please.
4/16/2003 c5 16S. Breland
Oh wow...
That's really good.
I'm bad at writing in first person. I try, but I have little skill for it, unless it's a narrative or parody on my life. Or something like that.
Seriously, I think that Havara (lol, forgot her real name already...) should marry someone from insert name of country at war here and sort of forge a new alliance or something? I dunno, I'm just musing. Ignore me. :-D
You're a fantastic writer!
~Pix
16S. BrelandOh wow...
That's really good.
I'm bad at writing in first person. I try, but I have little skill for it, unless it's a narrative or parody on my life. Or something like that.
Seriously, I think that Havara (lol, forgot her real name already...) should marry someone from insert name of country at war here and sort of forge a new alliance or something? I dunno, I'm just musing. Ignore me. :-D
You're a fantastic writer!
~Pix
4/15/2003 c4 Ms Urania
I like this so far. It flows well and I'm interested in what will happen to Havara next. However, you have a few spelling mistakes which distract from the story. Besides that good work!
I like this so far. It flows well and I'm interested in what will happen to Havara next. However, you have a few spelling mistakes which distract from the story. Besides that good work!
4/15/2003 c4 1Sweetvenom1
I love this story and I hope that you will update it soon. Havara is a good character, but she seems too neutral about her enslavement. she doesn't really struggle but she doesn't really accept it. but other than that everything is great.
1Sweetvenom1I love this story and I hope that you will update it soon. Havara is a good character, but she seems too neutral about her enslavement. she doesn't really struggle but she doesn't really accept it. but other than that everything is great.
4/10/2003 c3 4Weathered
Yay, you updated! *grin* I like your writing style, good description, and your characters are believable. Update soon!
4WeatheredYay, you updated! *grin* I like your writing style, good description, and your characters are believable. Update soon!
4/9/2003 c3 shapeshifterchik13
This is such a good story! You have to up date soon, I can't believe how fast I got hooked on it!
This is such a good story! You have to up date soon, I can't believe how fast I got hooked on it!
4/7/2003 c2 Weathered
This is good! Update soon I wanna know what happens. This is a very interesting start.
This is good! Update soon I wanna know what happens. This is a very interesting start.