5/21/2003 c1 Hele
This is sad...It's believeable, but a lot like your other short stories/scenes. While you write them very well, it might be good for you to get experience in writing something else (like I can talk. I write nothing but pain-filled angst).
This is sad...It's believeable, but a lot like your other short stories/scenes. While you write them very well, it might be good for you to get experience in writing something else (like I can talk. I write nothing but pain-filled angst).