
1/20/2006 c1 liquid gold
beautifully written, wonderfully paced
beautifully written, wonderfully paced
5/10/2005 c1
27GravitationDreams
Amazing poem. I know EXACTLY what it's like to fall headfirst in love with someone and have them completely break your heart. This poem decribes the feeling completely. Keep up the great work.Review me please!

Amazing poem. I know EXACTLY what it's like to fall headfirst in love with someone and have them completely break your heart. This poem decribes the feeling completely. Keep up the great work.Review me please!
7/12/2003 c1
95Ima-Wasteland
i love it, you're a wonderful writer.
~*~erika~*~
(and if you dont mind i am on a small mission to get as many reviews as humanly possible. please if you have the time review as much or little of my work as you see fit and all reviews, useful and flames, are welcomed. thanks even if you dont)

i love it, you're a wonderful writer.
~*~erika~*~
(and if you dont mind i am on a small mission to get as many reviews as humanly possible. please if you have the time review as much or little of my work as you see fit and all reviews, useful and flames, are welcomed. thanks even if you dont)
4/30/2003 c1
8RavenPhoenix
WOW! this is amazing! ive gone thru what u went thru... i almost lost my best friend over it twice... it wasnt great. i wrote a poem about what i went thru also its called Let Go if u want to read it... feel free to do so :)
keep up the great work :D
-*-Tara-*-

WOW! this is amazing! ive gone thru what u went thru... i almost lost my best friend over it twice... it wasnt great. i wrote a poem about what i went thru also its called Let Go if u want to read it... feel free to do so :)
keep up the great work :D
-*-Tara-*-
4/16/2003 c1
26a poetic tragedy
I love it. It's pretty much perfect. I've been in that situtation and it's just how you feel.

I love it. It's pretty much perfect. I've been in that situtation and it's just how you feel.
4/8/2003 c1
53Jupiter's Tears
This was a beautiful poem, no matter the subject. I loved the way it was written. Great job!

This was a beautiful poem, no matter the subject. I loved the way it was written. Great job!