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7/10/2003 c1 6Queen of the Sugarplum Fairies
this is probably the only short review i'll ever write, but honestly, i can't find words to express what i think about this poem. it's fantastic, i guess. and deep. and moving. and so many things that you just can't write down. you know what i mean? do you ever get that? you feel something so strongly but there is no way for you to say that feeling in words. anyways, basically you have my extreme and extravangant approval. even though it is way dark and angsty.
4/10/2003 c1 30BoarderKC
Wow, if only I had told my friend that maybe we wouldn't be in the mess we are. This poem is incredible. The lines like "the glint of metal beckons me" and "no matter how you hurt me, I can always hurt myself worse" are just so incredibly powerful. Just amazing.
4/10/2003 c1 5Erin2
you have a wonderful way with words. i also like the syntax and the lowercase letters at the beginning of the lines.. and of course, the content is excellent as usual... good song, too! heheh. i'm sorry you feel that depressed and angsty though.. if there is anything at all that i can do, let me know.
4/8/2003 c1 71Spider
"the glint of metal beckons me"

Shiny!

Good poem. Morbid, but morbid is goodness. Ben seal of approval.

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