for Jusqu' au matin10/15/2003 c1 
30Stratahawk
First, I just want to thank you for reviewing my poem, Final Prayer. Ok, onto the review. Absolutely wonderful work. I especially love the first sonnet, for some reason, it calls to me and stirs something in my soul. Both sonnets were beautifully written. Keep up the great work.
30StratahawkFirst, I just want to thank you for reviewing my poem, Final Prayer. Ok, onto the review. Absolutely wonderful work. I especially love the first sonnet, for some reason, it calls to me and stirs something in my soul. Both sonnets were beautifully written. Keep up the great work.
10/1/2003 c1 acccountkiller
hey, this is amazing, brilliant, i love it! i honestly think its hte best thing i've read hear, or one of the best. how old r u? ok, perso question, sry, my curiosity will kill me one day, this is so beautiful. hmm, is ur real name mia? thats my name, lol, and i love it cos its not a common name, and it sounds nice, well i'll just stop talking now, a masterpiece, wonderful poems, amazing. Twilight
hey, this is amazing, brilliant, i love it! i honestly think its hte best thing i've read hear, or one of the best. how old r u? ok, perso question, sry, my curiosity will kill me one day, this is so beautiful. hmm, is ur real name mia? thats my name, lol, and i love it cos its not a common name, and it sounds nice, well i'll just stop talking now, a masterpiece, wonderful poems, amazing. Twilight
8/21/2003 c1 116Incubabe
Wow! You're really talented. I was kinda skipping through your poem list looking for a short one and this kicks ass!
I love it - "Asphyxiated in the ice queen's claw" - you should be writing horror poems, seriously!
Diana x
116IncubabeWow! You're really talented. I was kinda skipping through your poem list looking for a short one and this kicks ass!
I love it - "Asphyxiated in the ice queen's claw" - you should be writing horror poems, seriously!
Diana x
4/18/2003 c1 Sun Rose Fox
melikes. weirdly religious... like my I TEGO ARCANA DEI... also similar that it has a title no one understands. hehe. ur poem's so... proper. like a proper good poem. hehe. yay!
melikes. weirdly religious... like my I TEGO ARCANA DEI... also similar that it has a title no one understands. hehe. ur poem's so... proper. like a proper good poem. hehe. yay!
4/10/2003 c1 13tainted mind
thats really good. i love the rhyme scheme and your word choice.well done(and thank you for reviewing my piece,lol)
13tainted mindthats really good. i love the rhyme scheme and your word choice.well done(and thank you for reviewing my piece,lol)
4/10/2003 c1 Hans
I like this poem... although not quite as much as I like sauerkraut... or, come to think of it, pickled fish. Good, what's the word? illiterate, good imagerrary and.. yeah. A damn good poem, good enough for all those partially deaf, blind and inhibited Germans whose bright spot on their horizon are Speedos. Thanks, miamouse.
I like this poem... although not quite as much as I like sauerkraut... or, come to think of it, pickled fish. Good, what's the word? illiterate, good imagerrary and.. yeah. A damn good poem, good enough for all those partially deaf, blind and inhibited Germans whose bright spot on their horizon are Speedos. Thanks, miamouse.
4/10/2003 c1 2Anarchy Burger
Bonjour Mia,
je pense que c'est très bon. Les français, comme moi, aime le sanguis. sanguis je vous tuerai *souris*
au revoir ma petite fille
mon amour
mon petit filou
mon chou flour
mon poulet mort
2Anarchy BurgerBonjour Mia,
je pense que c'est très bon. Les français, comme moi, aime le sanguis. sanguis je vous tuerai *souris*
au revoir ma petite fille
mon amour
mon petit filou
mon chou flour
mon poulet mort
4/9/2003 c1 39Clockwork Angel
both of the poems have very deep words and nice line construction but I think the second sonnet is superior to the first one in terms of the flow of the words...I like it really dark...
39Clockwork Angelboth of the poems have very deep words and nice line construction but I think the second sonnet is superior to the first one in terms of the flow of the words...I like it really dark...
4/9/2003 c1 14Ninsetta Tristel Sundar
I love the title. It's very appropriate for the tone of the stories. I also really liked the second one. the first one was still pretty good but it didn't quite catch my fancy so to speak. It was almost melodramatic..but then i kinda like melodramatic (as is obvious from any or all of my own poems). I liked the lines about the heart in the first one and especially the first three or four lines in the second. Thanks for reviewing my stuff too.
14Ninsetta Tristel SundarI love the title. It's very appropriate for the tone of the stories. I also really liked the second one. the first one was still pretty good but it didn't quite catch my fancy so to speak. It was almost melodramatic..but then i kinda like melodramatic (as is obvious from any or all of my own poems). I liked the lines about the heart in the first one and especially the first three or four lines in the second. Thanks for reviewing my stuff too.