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6/12/2004 c1 69this is britt
You seem like a cool person. I'm sorry- I hope things get better for you.
Your poem is pretty good- I read some of your other works and everything's so beautifully written, it's great.
4/12/2004 c1 24Society's Cavity
Very few poems can pull off this much repetition, but I love this! Even with the lack of variation, the point is conveyed very strongly. All in all, I just plain love this poem.
6/30/2003 c1 3v33
DAMN! that was good! and i dont think i'm exaggerating! Your a truely gifted writer! Love your poems, keep up that good skill of yours! ;)
6/18/2003 c1 greenfroggies
WOW! Brilliant! Luv it all and it has emotion and simplicity. One line (amd this is just me trying to find a problem in an almost perfect poem!) you could improve is 'Without any goal' I think it would sound better as 'without a goal'. :-b
4/10/2003 c1 98hurtmushroom
great one, very interesting. and very emotional.

cio, hoellenwauwau
4/10/2003 c1 21Miamouse
interesting. seems to get a bit repetitive near the end, even though I know you meant it to.

Good overall.

Mia :)

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