for Olivia the play9/19/2010 c2 Erin Rosamond Black
This is without a shadow of a doubt the best thing I have read on this site...ever. I cried for maybe half an hour. And the thing with Cara? I didn't see that coming!
I feel outclassed, you mean person.
This is without a shadow of a doubt the best thing I have read on this site...ever. I cried for maybe half an hour. And the thing with Cara? I didn't see that coming!
I feel outclassed, you mean person.
4/1/2005 c1 
198Not Quite Dry Eyed
this is absolutly amazing i loved it ! it is wonderful Keep writing pleaseR&R some of my stuff
Scarred Heart
198Not Quite Dry Eyedthis is absolutly amazing i loved it ! it is wonderful Keep writing pleaseR&R some of my stuff
Scarred Heart
2/25/2004 c1 morbid mind can't login here because I already reviewed this chapter
Hi, I really just want to ask you if you could possibly write another play/story like this, because this was excellent, amazing, really, I enjoyed it immensely.
-M.M.
Hi, I really just want to ask you if you could possibly write another play/story like this, because this was excellent, amazing, really, I enjoyed it immensely.
-M.M.
1/24/2004 c4 35Infinity Plus One
Holy fuck. I'm writing a story about a schizophrenic, but it's being re-edited (it's called "Demons", although I probably have changed it to "Demons old version").
35Infinity Plus OneHoly fuck. I'm writing a story about a schizophrenic, but it's being re-edited (it's called "Demons", although I probably have changed it to "Demons old version").
1/23/2004 c1 Infinity Plus One
That was amazing! Well done, dramatic and descriptive, the way that I really like it written. I don't have time to write a long review, but seriously, well done.
That was amazing! Well done, dramatic and descriptive, the way that I really like it written. I don't have time to write a long review, but seriously, well done.
7/31/2003 c3 47i was a postcard
wow. this was...wow. this hits close to home for me. see, my best friend is a paranoid schizophrenic w/ social phobias, an eating disorder, and bipolarism (I, too, am bi-polar.)
i think you did a fairly good job at describing the voices. i can't say if they're accurate, because it likely varies from person to person. my best friend's voices aren't like that at all...and she sees things too, AND she can feel things, with like, 0.1% of schizos can actually feel what they see. it's very rare. i think this was a fscinating play, very well written. great job. (btw, Liam is one of my favorite names for a boy, so nice pick there! lol)
47i was a postcardwow. this was...wow. this hits close to home for me. see, my best friend is a paranoid schizophrenic w/ social phobias, an eating disorder, and bipolarism (I, too, am bi-polar.)
i think you did a fairly good job at describing the voices. i can't say if they're accurate, because it likely varies from person to person. my best friend's voices aren't like that at all...and she sees things too, AND she can feel things, with like, 0.1% of schizos can actually feel what they see. it's very rare. i think this was a fscinating play, very well written. great job. (btw, Liam is one of my favorite names for a boy, so nice pick there! lol)
7/28/2003 c1 Allegretto
Hey, this is a good portrayal of going insane... Kinda creepy. Very nicely done. My one complaint is that the situation is a little... extreme or obvious. For example, I don't think they would allow the dangerous people near others or at least they would take away any potential wepons. Otherwise, very nice.
Hey, this is a good portrayal of going insane... Kinda creepy. Very nicely done. My one complaint is that the situation is a little... extreme or obvious. For example, I don't think they would allow the dangerous people near others or at least they would take away any potential wepons. Otherwise, very nice.
6/24/2003 c3 17Miss Wallflower
This is a pretty good story. A little rough around the edges, but it suits the subject matter.
17Miss WallflowerThis is a pretty good story. A little rough around the edges, but it suits the subject matter.
5/21/2003 c1 16New Age Prophet
good,
I like the writing. U need to edit some but other than that it's pretty good
16New Age Prophetgood,
I like the writing. U need to edit some but other than that it's pretty good
5/16/2003 c3 Luddite
Kate and Relena are being played by two young and talented actresses.
Relena is being played by Katy Witbrod. She has been in plays such as The Christmas Carol, Just a Highschool Play, Tom Jones, and Coconut High. Below is a link that shows a picture of Katy:
angelfire.com/freak/kateh/contact.htm
Kate is being played by Elane Meier. Elane has also been in the plays Just a Highschool Play, Tom Jones, and Coconut High. Sorry, I can't hind a picture of Elane that's online.
Kate and Relena are being played by two young and talented actresses.
Relena is being played by Katy Witbrod. She has been in plays such as The Christmas Carol, Just a Highschool Play, Tom Jones, and Coconut High. Below is a link that shows a picture of Katy:
angelfire.com/freak/kateh/contact.htm
Kate is being played by Elane Meier. Elane has also been in the plays Just a Highschool Play, Tom Jones, and Coconut High. Sorry, I can't hind a picture of Elane that's online.
5/15/2003 c3 10Fangelir
Oh I'd love to come! If only I didn't live over 10 miles away! Who's playing Relena and Kate?
10FangelirOh I'd love to come! If only I didn't live over 10 miles away! Who's playing Relena and Kate?
5/13/2003 c1 5LauraLizz007
wow. that's really deep. very frightening at points, like how Olivia's father reacts when she breaks the dishes. you must have done lots of research on scitzophrenia to write this, and i think it is very talented and well written.
Rhapsody
5LauraLizz007wow. that's really deep. very frightening at points, like how Olivia's father reacts when she breaks the dishes. you must have done lots of research on scitzophrenia to write this, and i think it is very talented and well written.
Rhapsody
5/11/2003 c2 Kris
i wanna see the play! info please!
i wanna see the play! info please!
5/9/2003 c2 Marina
i would love to see this! This has to be one of my favorites of everything on this site!
i would love to see this! This has to be one of my favorites of everything on this site!
5/9/2003 c2 2Farmer Jen
wow. i usually don't like depressing stuff, but that was really good. yet depressing. i did like your liam tuddie character, though. sarcasm is good.
2Farmer Jenwow. i usually don't like depressing stuff, but that was really good. yet depressing. i did like your liam tuddie character, though. sarcasm is good.