for The world as seen by Chikara12/30/2005 c1 
11Jez-Arinn
ahha... I get the picture of this small little boy staring out through a window thinking: "no sun = no play out" haha...
sry, please don't take this as an insult ^^
11Jez-Arinnahha... I get the picture of this small little boy staring out through a window thinking: "no sun = no play out" haha...
sry, please don't take this as an insult ^^
12/26/2004 c2 Ivriniel
I like the last line and also the verbs you used. They emphasize the fact that the Ivy will never let go.
I like the last line and also the verbs you used. They emphasize the fact that the Ivy will never let go.
5/21/2004 c6 31PaganScribe
i only had time to read the first 5 but there amazxng. Publish a complitation of your haikus AMAZING!
I LOVE FINAL BOW ASWELL!
Danny.
31PaganScribei only had time to read the first 5 but there amazxng. Publish a complitation of your haikus AMAZING!
I LOVE FINAL BOW ASWELL!
Danny.
4/20/2004 c9 81daphnegray78
It's very hard to portray emotions in a haiku, because of the limited syllables...but you did an incredible job. Plus, I can totally relate because I feel like that a lot. Impresive work.
81daphnegray78It's very hard to portray emotions in a haiku, because of the limited syllables...but you did an incredible job. Plus, I can totally relate because I feel like that a lot. Impresive work.
3/17/2004 c1 A Beautiful Nightmare
I love those kinds of days... it just makes me sleepy and dream... wow! a 227 reviews... you must write excellently... keep up the good work...
I love those kinds of days... it just makes me sleepy and dream... wow! a 227 reviews... you must write excellently... keep up the good work...
1/11/2004 c51 148JJR Meerraf
I finished the first collection! Now I move on to the next! It has been such a joy and a pleasure! I will continue to read your work with great joy! It's always a joy to read your writing, wonderful again!
148JJR MeerrafI finished the first collection! Now I move on to the next! It has been such a joy and a pleasure! I will continue to read your work with great joy! It's always a joy to read your writing, wonderful again!
1/11/2004 c50 JJR Meerraf
Happy 50! A little late, I'll admit it, but it's cool to see your writing progress from the beginning on. A wonderufl Haiku again dedicated to a good cause! Excellent!
Happy 50! A little late, I'll admit it, but it's cool to see your writing progress from the beginning on. A wonderufl Haiku again dedicated to a good cause! Excellent!
1/11/2004 c47 JJR Meerraf
Made me smile. We do all not notice it at times. Once again your inspiration and writing shocks me! Great work!
Made me smile. We do all not notice it at times. Once again your inspiration and writing shocks me! Great work!
1/11/2004 c46 JJR Meerraf
Really cool! I could see a mystical land in my head! One of my favs of course!
Really cool! I could see a mystical land in my head! One of my favs of course!
1/11/2004 c45 JJR Meerraf
Good, not just a thirst for water, but something else. A wonderful description! Magnificent and always captivating, as I've grown accustommed to in reading your work :-). Wonderful!
Good, not just a thirst for water, but something else. A wonderful description! Magnificent and always captivating, as I've grown accustommed to in reading your work :-). Wonderful!