for Til You Learn1/26/2004 c1 Axel Blaze
Will you please write more? What happens to her? Who is the God that stays by her side?
Will you please write more? What happens to her? Who is the God that stays by her side?
7/8/2003 c1 Lord GS-41
And you're the one talking about the sorrows of death. Your site is ultimately depressing...
And you're the one talking about the sorrows of death. Your site is ultimately depressing...
6/21/2003 c1 jamie
srry this is probably going to sound mean i don't mean it to be but is english your native language? if not, you could talk a little to your english teacher and get her to help you out cuz the main idea of this is good but i kept noticing things that didn't make any sense...if your passion is writing keep it up you have potential but...there is room for improvement
srry this is probably going to sound mean i don't mean it to be but is english your native language? if not, you could talk a little to your english teacher and get her to help you out cuz the main idea of this is good but i kept noticing things that didn't make any sense...if your passion is writing keep it up you have potential but...there is room for improvement
6/20/2003 c1 Lord GS-41
Sequel this up where the priest gets his * shot up before the sacrifice. What kind of religion is this again?
Sequel this up where the priest gets his * shot up before the sacrifice. What kind of religion is this again?
6/14/2003 c9 Jenny
Hi! I had nothing to do so I thought I'd read this story! Like your writing style! Very interesting, wasn't boring at all. Keep up the good work! And oh, updated Twisted Fate already! Go check it out!
http:/w.winglin.net/fanfic/jen5/
Hi! I had nothing to do so I thought I'd read this story! Like your writing style! Very interesting, wasn't boring at all. Keep up the good work! And oh, updated Twisted Fate already! Go check it out!
http:/w.winglin.net/fanfic/jen5/
5/22/2003 c1 Jayme
Hello. The granola barre says you are not weird, and she is. That's bloodless but don't tell her i told you that or she'll get mad. So, um, you're not as crazy and weird as her. Thankyou.
Jayme
Hello. The granola barre says you are not weird, and she is. That's bloodless but don't tell her i told you that or she'll get mad. So, um, you're not as crazy and weird as her. Thankyou.
Jayme
5/10/2003 c8 
6deadkitty1
oh poor kay! i have bad dreams too but not like those. so what's going to happen?
6deadkitty1oh poor kay! i have bad dreams too but not like those. so what's going to happen?
5/10/2003 c1 electricat
doesnt make sense. try writing about a silver tigress it is ur screen name. also baby johns is a restraunt in my area, they have great pizza
doesnt make sense. try writing about a silver tigress it is ur screen name. also baby johns is a restraunt in my area, they have great pizza
5/3/2003 c8 7Africa
OOh, creepy. Nice and intriguing. I love the "100% cotton pillowcase." Update soon!
-Elaine
Maybe you could check out my stuff?
7AfricaOOh, creepy. Nice and intriguing. I love the "100% cotton pillowcase." Update soon!
-Elaine
Maybe you could check out my stuff?
5/1/2003 c8 Davis
It is the borinist story I ever read
It is the borinist story I ever read