for The Moon4/11/2003 c1 
3Tiffany Kremer
First, I'd like to say that when it comes to poetry, I can't really give that great of review. The reason for this is because poetry comes from within. It is inner thoughts, dreams, personal experiences. So I can't tell you that something is wrong. Er...if you get any of that, hehe.
But but I can say, is that this was a beautifully written poem. I have always been fascinated with the moon and you were able to write down words that can capture some of it's beauty. Wonderful job!
3Tiffany KremerFirst, I'd like to say that when it comes to poetry, I can't really give that great of review. The reason for this is because poetry comes from within. It is inner thoughts, dreams, personal experiences. So I can't tell you that something is wrong. Er...if you get any of that, hehe.
But but I can say, is that this was a beautifully written poem. I have always been fascinated with the moon and you were able to write down words that can capture some of it's beauty. Wonderful job!