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5/12/2003 c1 7Khan the Mongol
Death defines us all

Yet we quicken it with war

It is our nature

Man will never cease

Their hostilities this day

Nor will they ever

It is sad but hope

Lies within our childrens souls

Will they change our fate?
4/19/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
Wah~

Powerful words used. Nice strings of words. I have nothing more to say.
4/15/2003 c1 35aurias
Very intersting form. Alternation. While reading it, the flow is also very smooth. Good job.
4/14/2003 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
Really pwerful portrayal...I like your alternation between regular and cut haiku. We're all praying!
4/12/2003 c1 28ChaoxAngel
IMHO, your experimentations have really paid off - resulting in a very unique and nice to read piece. Great work! I would like to try writing in your style one day as well... :o)

~DW
4/12/2003 c1 Joflower
That's amazing! Good job!
4/11/2003 c1 68Princess Mulan
Thank you so much for writing cut poems, again!

You are a great, great writer!

This Haiku is one of the deepest Haiku I've ever read! You're so amazing.

War is an very ugly thing, I wish we can live without them

Great job
4/11/2003 c1 34Children of the Root
awesome job alternating the cut and regular haikus. I really like this one. Great Job!
4/11/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Awesome job. The haiku and cut pieces go really well together.

~Heart of the Sword

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