for Guardians8/10/2004 c10 
2Queen of dawn
This story is very good and its well planned out! beautiful...hope to read the rest!
2Queen of dawnThis story is very good and its well planned out! beautiful...hope to read the rest!
3/4/2004 c16 8Raven Oghma
Oh, boy, you guys... This is utterly beautiful. I'm so glad I found this! There were very select few grammar mistakes, but that's bound to be found in any story (especially my own). The characters are exquisite and formed marevellously. I can't wait to read more!
Although, I must say that every time I read "Azrael", I want to think it's "Israel". Though Azrael's a bit more like Asmodeus! (just a bit; hee.)
I love this story. Amazing job and keep up the great work!
-Raven Oghma
8Raven OghmaOh, boy, you guys... This is utterly beautiful. I'm so glad I found this! There were very select few grammar mistakes, but that's bound to be found in any story (especially my own). The characters are exquisite and formed marevellously. I can't wait to read more!
Although, I must say that every time I read "Azrael", I want to think it's "Israel". Though Azrael's a bit more like Asmodeus! (just a bit; hee.)
I love this story. Amazing job and keep up the great work!
-Raven Oghma
3/2/2004 c16 1ShadowCode
Wow, I'm not sure if I really should like Azrael, but I do! Still, Drake IS the man, and I'm just dying to see what direction you guys are gonna take this in. Who knows how Azrael could upset the Guardians, right?
1ShadowCodeWow, I'm not sure if I really should like Azrael, but I do! Still, Drake IS the man, and I'm just dying to see what direction you guys are gonna take this in. Who knows how Azrael could upset the Guardians, right?
2/26/2004 c16 Aaron
Oh yea, get in there. Hee hee hee.
"I feel a bout of anarchy coming on." What a line.
Indeed one of the most crazy chapters yet. Please write more and soon I have missed you guys.
AAron
Oh yea, get in there. Hee hee hee.
"I feel a bout of anarchy coming on." What a line.
Indeed one of the most crazy chapters yet. Please write more and soon I have missed you guys.
AAron
2/25/2004 c16 2KashaStar
i like this ch. alot, it gives an excellant vision of all the violence. but even though it's good action, you shouldn't get to ahead of yourself and let the mystery of Azrael get to far without explaination (that and i really really wanna know who the heck he is!)
keep it up!
2KashaStari like this ch. alot, it gives an excellant vision of all the violence. but even though it's good action, you shouldn't get to ahead of yourself and let the mystery of Azrael get to far without explaination (that and i really really wanna know who the heck he is!)
keep it up!
2/23/2004 c15 KashaStar
i love this story! it's really good, i love the sly remarks between Drake and Odin, very funny. it's very real and dramatic. can't wait for the next ch., i hafta know what happens!
i love this story! it's really good, i love the sly remarks between Drake and Odin, very funny. it's very real and dramatic. can't wait for the next ch., i hafta know what happens!
1/14/2004 c1 11PhoenixLament
wow the first chapter rocks i look forward to continueing through the story. sorry it took so long to finally read it but i been so busy.
11PhoenixLamentwow the first chapter rocks i look forward to continueing through the story. sorry it took so long to finally read it but i been so busy.
1/8/2004 c15 some guy
When you guys finish this... please please please send it to a publisher.
Fav character... gotta be Drake... he is crazy!
When you guys finish this... please please please send it to a publisher.
Fav character... gotta be Drake... he is crazy!
1/7/2004 c15 Darren Fletcher. no not the footballer
Really heating up guys.
I have a question, maybe you could answer it for me. Where did Vatch and co dissapear to. One minute they were there and then in the words of Avid Merrian Shazam (David Blaine style) they were gone.
Where Vatch and Kurtha just there for a romantic clinch? Or are they in it for the long road to Armagedon?
And just gotta say... and sorry if I offend someone who likes him... But Odin is a bit gay! hee hee, not that I'm a homophobe but come on... a camp hero?
anyway, bye bye
Really heating up guys.
I have a question, maybe you could answer it for me. Where did Vatch and co dissapear to. One minute they were there and then in the words of Avid Merrian Shazam (David Blaine style) they were gone.
Where Vatch and Kurtha just there for a romantic clinch? Or are they in it for the long road to Armagedon?
And just gotta say... and sorry if I offend someone who likes him... But Odin is a bit gay! hee hee, not that I'm a homophobe but come on... a camp hero?
anyway, bye bye
1/7/2004 c1 Aaron Fulton
OMG!
Surely you haven't killed off Drake... OMG. Has to be something to do with this Azrael dude, he must be able to save Drake somehow.
All right what an awesome chapter. You guys are like fine wine... you just keep getting better.
But let me tell you, if Drake is dead I'm coming to motherwell! Wherever that is!
love you guys to bits.
laters AAron
OMG!
Surely you haven't killed off Drake... OMG. Has to be something to do with this Azrael dude, he must be able to save Drake somehow.
All right what an awesome chapter. You guys are like fine wine... you just keep getting better.
But let me tell you, if Drake is dead I'm coming to motherwell! Wherever that is!
love you guys to bits.
laters AAron
1/5/2004 c15 1ShadowCode
Oh man! I love how you guys do this so well, especially liked the gradual possesion of Drake's mind as the situation requires. The action and plot are top class as usual, but I also thought that this section was just better than anything you've written before. Pace, humour, action and prose, it all comes together wonderfully. And as for the last paragraph of DK chapter 2...well that was just utterly, utterly superb.
1ShadowCodeOh man! I love how you guys do this so well, especially liked the gradual possesion of Drake's mind as the situation requires. The action and plot are top class as usual, but I also thought that this section was just better than anything you've written before. Pace, humour, action and prose, it all comes together wonderfully. And as for the last paragraph of DK chapter 2...well that was just utterly, utterly superb.
1/5/2004 c15 9I am tabitha
Finally you wrote more ans it's superb as always! I can't wait for the next installment...
9I am tabithaFinally you wrote more ans it's superb as always! I can't wait for the next installment...
1/1/2004 c1 9QuillKitten
I really liked the way you started out. You have a talent for doing the background details and flashbacks. I always drag those out. I can't believe that you have such a great Sci-fi sense, it seems easy to explain how things work. Pretty cool. describing Jax in the first chapter was a little rough, sorta choppy. I promise to read more later! especially if you kepp on posting. Maybe I'll catch up. Thanks for the review. ^.^ Go check out Mac Attack's story Shattered Glass. It's really good!
9QuillKittenI really liked the way you started out. You have a talent for doing the background details and flashbacks. I always drag those out. I can't believe that you have such a great Sci-fi sense, it seems easy to explain how things work. Pretty cool. describing Jax in the first chapter was a little rough, sorta choppy. I promise to read more later! especially if you kepp on posting. Maybe I'll catch up. Thanks for the review. ^.^ Go check out Mac Attack's story Shattered Glass. It's really good!
11/17/2003 c12 Aaron Fulton
Told you I would be back,
ok, first thing as in point 1. ha ha,
upon reading through the story, right at the start the bit about the Madadnesse war... (did I spell that right?) I think it would be a cool idea to have like a spin off... Maybe showing what happened during the war... or is that too Saving Private Ryan for you guys?
2. WHERE IS THE NEXT PART... god, it's not like a guy can get the methadone equivilant to Guardians now is it?
3. I'm hungry... and tired... and horny... not that u needed to know that but hey. hee hee.
4. How kick ass is it gonna be when Godoran shows up... can't wait guys.
Love your writing, you BOTH R DA MEN!
AAron
Told you I would be back,
ok, first thing as in point 1. ha ha,
upon reading through the story, right at the start the bit about the Madadnesse war... (did I spell that right?) I think it would be a cool idea to have like a spin off... Maybe showing what happened during the war... or is that too Saving Private Ryan for you guys?
2. WHERE IS THE NEXT PART... god, it's not like a guy can get the methadone equivilant to Guardians now is it?
3. I'm hungry... and tired... and horny... not that u needed to know that but hey. hee hee.
4. How kick ass is it gonna be when Godoran shows up... can't wait guys.
Love your writing, you BOTH R DA MEN!
AAron