for the exquisite pain of you12/4/2005 c1 
7Alankria
This reads like a song.
...Is there any chance I could use it as a song in one of my novels? I won't actually write the story for a few years, as it's book 3 in a series and I'm still only finishing off book 1, but this fits with the plans I have for book 3 as well as setting off thoughts about new plans.
Let me know what you think. Email
As it stands, this poem is fantastic. You have a talent for evoking the darker emotions within ourselves.
7AlankriaThis reads like a song.
...Is there any chance I could use it as a song in one of my novels? I won't actually write the story for a few years, as it's book 3 in a series and I'm still only finishing off book 1, but this fits with the plans I have for book 3 as well as setting off thoughts about new plans.
Let me know what you think. Email
As it stands, this poem is fantastic. You have a talent for evoking the darker emotions within ourselves.
1/8/2005 c1 7tickle-me-pretty15
This is a great poem really dark.Well i hope to see another poem one day :) ~tickles~
7tickle-me-pretty15This is a great poem really dark.Well i hope to see another poem one day :) ~tickles~
4/13/2003 c1 saima
Good poem. It reminds me of how my life is at the moment. Continue writing. You write good.
Good poem. It reminds me of how my life is at the moment. Continue writing. You write good.