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8/6/2006 c1 2writergurlLW
Great short poem. I wish I could write poetry as good as yourself.
3/2/2004 c1 Heather
Thsi is awesome! This is a really good poem. I can totally see why your teacher cried. I loved it!
6/17/2003 c1 50Alequinn
Wow, this is nicely done. You capture the feeling very well. I could agree on the innocence part. It opened Americans to the little bits and pieces of truth, at least, the way I see it. As a result, the public is more aware of the world than ever before. I wish all that is dark would come to light soon, so that we could mend it and create a better future for each and everyone of us to live in. Anyway, good job.
4/15/2003 c1 Da Muff'n Man
I think America's innocence was firmly gon after WW2, at the latest. What I believe was lost that day was...Trust. Americans will never trust the world again. Let me see If I can show you what I mean through a quote:

"We gave peace a chance and it cost us 9/11"-pro war slogan
4/15/2003 c1 26SILVA-eR
It's...interesting...
4/13/2003 c1 saima
hate to break it to you, but america's innocence was broken way before that. it's a nice poem but yeah, i don't agree with most of the stuff you said.
4/13/2003 c1 surgeon
Wow this is a really good poem. I dont agree with anything you said, but even still I found it moving!

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