12/31/2003 c4 1Kessa Queen of Night
hello insane little author...kol story u got so far! update SOON!

9/25/2003 c4 11forbiddenfantasy
LOL! i couldnt stop laughing! Rejected gareth! Damn! ure such a good writer!

I'm actually looking forward to an ariel/gareth romance now, more than a joan/firen one! damn! This chapter was the greatest!

oh, and by thew ay, do the elements have just oddly coloured irises, or whole eyes coloured?

9/25/2003 c2 forbiddenfantasy
WOW! loved this chapter!

the boy reminded me of majekei from 'A girl's fate' though...because of the prophecy type scenario i guess, but i just luv prophecies!

9/16/2003 c4 FarieFaye
hee hee hey! very good story! yup! very funny! keep up the good good work! ^.^

7/16/2003 c1 Kris
I like Ariel a lot. you should continue with it. i really want to know why the world is in ruins and how its going to turn out. the story has a lot of potential.

4/13/2003 c1 10Fangelir
This is interesting so far. I like the characters. There are some spelling errors, but that's about it. More chapters should clear up any confusion I have about the setting and the history behind these characters. Great start. Update soon!