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4/15/2003 c1 38Lucy Hawthorne
wow, very impressed. It has a few grammatical errors, but editing doesn't catch all of that.

also, I was a bit confused about who won the war. Was it Varant or Myrtana? And als, why were Lee and his followers allowed out of the forcefield while the rest had to stay?

Other than that, which isn't much considering how confusing some of my stories are, I loved it. I really would like to know what happens next.

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