for Erin's Poetry Collection1/26/2005 c35 baker
thelast three lines are terribly clinche, but other than that, i love your phrasing.
thelast three lines are terribly clinche, but other than that, i love your phrasing.
4/20/2003 c2 firemounrain
second line, "to" should be "too"
Poetry contest. what did the judges think?
second line, "to" should be "too"
Poetry contest. what did the judges think?
4/20/2003 c1 firemounrain
Yeah, I know exactly the feeling. unrequited love is the most annoying thing.
Yeah, I know exactly the feeling. unrequited love is the most annoying thing.
4/18/2003 c10 
41ionlyliveindreams
This one is really cool! It's kinda like my poem "A Poet's Life" But it's still different. It kind of like the other one you wrote called "The Poetry" I really like poems about poetry. I also like saying that *giggles* anyways great poems! I really liked the "TV" one and also the "A Suicide?" one. The TV one was great. I don't watch to much TV so I'm safe from the "unattractive slouch" ;)
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams
41ionlyliveindreamsThis one is really cool! It's kinda like my poem "A Poet's Life" But it's still different. It kind of like the other one you wrote called "The Poetry" I really like poems about poetry. I also like saying that *giggles* anyways great poems! I really liked the "TV" one and also the "A Suicide?" one. The TV one was great. I don't watch to much TV so I'm safe from the "unattractive slouch" ;)
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams
4/18/2003 c6 ionlyliveindreams
Heheh. I liked the ones before this but this one I can totally relate to. I'd love to get more work done without sleeping but I love sleeping! Most of the time I can't and I end up staying up and writing or reading. Anyways, I like how you expressed this. very cool! ;)
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams
Heheh. I liked the ones before this but this one I can totally relate to. I'd love to get more work done without sleeping but I love sleeping! Most of the time I can't and I end up staying up and writing or reading. Anyways, I like how you expressed this. very cool! ;)
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams
4/18/2003 c2 ionlyliveindreams
Hey! I really like the first one! That is so great! And the second one is cool too. I love all the questions :) Was the contest on Poetry.com? I hate how you have to cut it down to 20 lines or less. Most of mine are alot more. Anyways, I'm going to read some more of your poems :)
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams
Hey! I really like the first one! That is so great! And the second one is cool too. I love all the questions :) Was the contest on Poetry.com? I hate how you have to cut it down to 20 lines or less. Most of mine are alot more. Anyways, I'm going to read some more of your poems :)
Keep writing
~ionlyliveindreams