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9/6/2003 c1 148JJR Meerraf
That was really nice, and imaginative. It brought across a different view point of "Mr. Moon." Applause
9/3/2003 c1 53Artemis Astralstar
sweet.
8/20/2003 c1 Deana Bell
Wow! This is amazing!

~God bless~
7/4/2003 c1 lainxauber
Wonderful job. I love poems about nighttime.
6/14/2003 c1 200Ashes of a Willow
that was a very interesting poem! i liked it a lot!
6/8/2003 c1 28tahayov
thats nice..i really love the topic.. ur talking about the moon as if hes a human and i love that!

hope u could read and review some of my work plz
6/7/2003 c1 34Smoky Bear
brilliant! i love the moon
6/1/2003 c1 35Mime
^.^ The moon is a very mysterious thing to wonder about...I like how you said in the last line, "That's Mr. Moon!". Very cute idea.
5/25/2003 c1 71QueenOfTheUniverse
Ah! I love thinking about the moon that way! Great poem!
5/16/2003 c1 38Shadafakup
Wow.. Nicely done man.. I liked it.. Beautiful description and its great how u managed to make the whole thing in haiku format.. Cool... Great piece..
5/12/2003 c1 2afluffierELFthanthou
wow that's pretty! i like it! *giggle* i luv japanese poetry too! yay! *hug* FREE HUG FOR REVIEWING MY FICCIEZ! (dont ask) keep it up!
5/7/2003 c1 14Zechariah
That was beautiful. It feels like a fairy tale.

Thanks for your review!
5/6/2003 c1 8RavenPhoenix
this is cute :):)
5/1/2003 c1 28soulspring
great personification. i love these haikus of yours.
4/29/2003 c1 128Zainab
very beautiful haiku! i like it. hehe. i love moons and other celestial things. ^^
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