for Mr Moon4/20/2003 c1 
36obsidian katana
wonderful haiku! great imagery, descriptions, comparisons, and personification! i love this! great job! keep up your writing!
36obsidian katanawonderful haiku! great imagery, descriptions, comparisons, and personification! i love this! great job! keep up your writing!
4/16/2003 c1 68Princess Mulan
This is really, really lovely work!
I love all how your mind works, all the time. So creative and so inspiring.
These are really lovely imagry of the moon. You're a wonderful writer!
I love your work.
p.s. thanks for putting me on your bio page and your favorite list. I put you on my fvorite list, too.
please, keep being the great writer you are.
68Princess MulanThis is really, really lovely work!
I love all how your mind works, all the time. So creative and so inspiring.
These are really lovely imagry of the moon. You're a wonderful writer!
I love your work.
p.s. thanks for putting me on your bio page and your favorite list. I put you on my fvorite list, too.
please, keep being the great writer you are.
4/16/2003 c1 14reveileb maerdyad
made me think of those ladybug fairytale covers. : ) i think the wording was very effective, vague and yet there's something that pulls you despite the "droopy eyelids", and that's sort of how i also think of the moon. : )
14reveileb maerdyadmade me think of those ladybug fairytale covers. : ) i think the wording was very effective, vague and yet there's something that pulls you despite the "droopy eyelids", and that's sort of how i also think of the moon. : )
4/15/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
Very nice. The moon is a beautiful thing, whether full, half, crescent, whatever. Anyway, keep it up.~CT
43Carter TachikawaVery nice. The moon is a beautiful thing, whether full, half, crescent, whatever. Anyway, keep it up.~CT
4/14/2003 c1 28ChaoxAngel
That is a very good description of the Moon - he comes alive in your Haiku... Well done! :o)
~DW
28ChaoxAngelThat is a very good description of the Moon - he comes alive in your Haiku... Well done! :o)
~DW