for An Autobiography Of a Slightly Crazy Kid8/9/2004 c2 
6nats56
nobody writes in their own personal journals like this... i think you need to look it over... cause thingy isnt a word... but you are the grammar expert... just thought id let you know
6nats56nobody writes in their own personal journals like this... i think you need to look it over... cause thingy isnt a word... but you are the grammar expert... just thought id let you know
5/4/2003 c1 6nats56
hey... you reviewed my "story" maybe if you read the second chapter you would understand... because it explains alot. As example... it can be looked at as very political... just written differently... yeah... so the grammar isnt that cool.. but its part of the charm.. on top of that... you have to read it in your own way and keep your own mind open... but everyone has different opinions... and some are more open minded than others... by the way... the starting of this story is written well... the rest could be better judging by the start... the way you put words around... ex: literally went to college for preschool. My mom went to Triton College where they held a preschool.
I had no concept of date or time, that was before I went slightly crazy... that seemed to catch my attention.. but anyways... thanks for reviewing anyways... next time you read something... look for content and not grammar ;)
6nats56hey... you reviewed my "story" maybe if you read the second chapter you would understand... because it explains alot. As example... it can be looked at as very political... just written differently... yeah... so the grammar isnt that cool.. but its part of the charm.. on top of that... you have to read it in your own way and keep your own mind open... but everyone has different opinions... and some are more open minded than others... by the way... the starting of this story is written well... the rest could be better judging by the start... the way you put words around... ex: literally went to college for preschool. My mom went to Triton College where they held a preschool.
I had no concept of date or time, that was before I went slightly crazy... that seemed to catch my attention.. but anyways... thanks for reviewing anyways... next time you read something... look for content and not grammar ;)
4/15/2003 c1 2royalberry
stupid story here but yeah: millions of sperm won the race there your little guy just ate through the egg a lot faster. But hey as long as it was a y chromosome you would have been the same as you are now because all of the sperm have the same DNA. Just had to tell someone.
2royalberrystupid story here but yeah: millions of sperm won the race there your little guy just ate through the egg a lot faster. But hey as long as it was a y chromosome you would have been the same as you are now because all of the sperm have the same DNA. Just had to tell someone.
4/15/2003 c1 Anony-Mouse
it started out really good then it got not-so-good. I'm sure it would be better if you finished it.
it started out really good then it got not-so-good. I'm sure it would be better if you finished it.