for Songs of the Angel4/9/2009 c2 
10hayella
It shall be done. I really like it, a lot.
TY:)
Thank you very much. If you don't mind, please check out Angel's Grandeur, and if you'll be so kind, then tell me what you think. Thank you very much for letting me read this. Maybe after you read the story, you can understand why I became so glad after I read yours.
God bless!
10hayellaIt shall be done. I really like it, a lot.
TY:)
Thank you very much. If you don't mind, please check out Angel's Grandeur, and if you'll be so kind, then tell me what you think. Thank you very much for letting me read this. Maybe after you read the story, you can understand why I became so glad after I read yours.
God bless!
4/9/2009 c1 hayella
Thank you so much for letting me read this. It helps in an unexplainable way. Angels sure give different people different views and thoughts. It may be because they're immortals ... I still do not know. But sometime in the future, if you have more to say about angels, may I request to learn more?
Thank you very much!
Thank you so much for letting me read this. It helps in an unexplainable way. Angels sure give different people different views and thoughts. It may be because they're immortals ... I still do not know. But sometime in the future, if you have more to say about angels, may I request to learn more?
Thank you very much!
1/28/2005 c2 26Sylvara
All I can say is that Sidekickwannabe's right: it's lovely but disappointing for the reasons she mentioned. So bad there isn't more action...!
PS: I'm french so please don't mind my spelling.
26SylvaraAll I can say is that Sidekickwannabe's right: it's lovely but disappointing for the reasons she mentioned. So bad there isn't more action...!
PS: I'm french so please don't mind my spelling.
8/4/2003 c2 4ColorCrayons
yay! good chapter. it's interesting the shape that you had the Lord form. i love it. i was wondering if you were planning to continue, im glad that you ended up doing so despite the original plan
~color outside the lines~
4ColorCrayonsyay! good chapter. it's interesting the shape that you had the Lord form. i love it. i was wondering if you were planning to continue, im glad that you ended up doing so despite the original plan
~color outside the lines~
7/22/2003 c2 12Rhetorics
oh woah... this simple story is very symbolic. I like it. It really shows how emotions here on earth bring us pain. Good job.
12Rhetoricsoh woah... this simple story is very symbolic. I like it. It really shows how emotions here on earth bring us pain. Good job.
7/22/2003 c1 Rhetorics
wow... very beautifully written. If someone told me the summary of the first chapter, I would've thought it was a cliche storyline but the way u wrote it... it's very un-cliche lol. I like it!
wow... very beautifully written. If someone told me the summary of the first chapter, I would've thought it was a cliche storyline but the way u wrote it... it's very un-cliche lol. I like it!
6/27/2003 c1 22poisonous
this was great, sad and too short lol
but i liked it, nothing bad to say about it other than you should add on to it :)
22poisonousthis was great, sad and too short lol
but i liked it, nothing bad to say about it other than you should add on to it :)
6/10/2003 c1 20Sidekickwannabe
Disappointing. It's good imagery and all but I'm disappointed by the shortness of the story. I was looking forward to something longer, with more story, explaining and going into the whole process. How'd he fall in love with the moral? What about her separated her from everyone else? Did he contact her? What about God? Sure he kicked him out of heaven but give God a voice, give all these characters voices. You've already got the ending, why not finish it with a beginning and middle?
20SidekickwannabeDisappointing. It's good imagery and all but I'm disappointed by the shortness of the story. I was looking forward to something longer, with more story, explaining and going into the whole process. How'd he fall in love with the moral? What about her separated her from everyone else? Did he contact her? What about God? Sure he kicked him out of heaven but give God a voice, give all these characters voices. You've already got the ending, why not finish it with a beginning and middle?
5/21/2003 c1 JoeyStar
Wow! this is so sad... is there gonna be anymore? anyway, i hope there is cos i think its a really gud plot idea.
keep writing,
lv Joey x
p.s: thanks for reviewing my story!
Wow! this is so sad... is there gonna be anymore? anyway, i hope there is cos i think its a really gud plot idea.
keep writing,
lv Joey x
p.s: thanks for reviewing my story!
4/17/2003 c1 ColorCrayons
i really liked it! it had a good amount of detail, not too much to put ya ta sleep, and an interesting plot line. for the moment i cant think of anything negative to comment on at the moment. update asap, i enjoyed reading it!
i really liked it! it had a good amount of detail, not too much to put ya ta sleep, and an interesting plot line. for the moment i cant think of anything negative to comment on at the moment. update asap, i enjoyed reading it!