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4/9/2005 c1 Kamay ko ang nagsulat
has he any conscience?
7/9/2003 c1 1liquor knight
oh my, now i'm thinking enishi's gone mad in your brain. and you're speaking like a deranged tsuzuki/muraki from Yami no Matsuei
6/5/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
Sounds so much like Kenshin and Seta. heh, I'm a big fan of RK so just ignore me while I dream on...

This is so beautiful...
5/31/2003 c1 34Smoky Bear
*gasp* so powerful... amazing.
5/25/2003 c1 5Dying Amarant
Fantastic, i just started reading your work. but this one instantly got you on my favorite authors list. My favorite part was the last 4 lines.
5/22/2003 c1 31Modern Poet
An Amazing creation!

A lot of people definatly need to read this poem! You have such a mature perspective.
5/22/2003 c1 Kyalia
Hate really does corrode the vessel. And it's good for writing.
5/22/2003 c1 9Demona Nightwing
Your darkly emotional but very expressive wording resonate with me very deeply. I certainly can empathize with the spirit of your poem and it does help inspire my own darkly creative energy. Keep writing.
5/18/2003 c1 44The Assassin's Shadow
Hm, cool poem- oy I'm tired! Keep writing!
5/8/2003 c1 8glitterjewele
ah, this was very good! what i loved most about it (aside from the powerful message) was the way it sort of put me in a setting (which was full of fire and black rocks, or else gettysburg) even though i couldn't really point out specific descriptions that made me create one for myself . . . but anyway moving on. favorite lines for this one were: "blood/dripping out of the victims you choose," "escape/the silent shadow," "the ghost of your ill-fated past," "those chains you so despise/were built by your own heart," "your own soul/that bound itself to your past," and the entire rain stanza. a very powerful piece. awesome work!
5/5/2003 c1 4Flyet
That was sad! Thats all the review I can think of though...
5/1/2003 c1 luz perdida
GAH! you get more reviews per poem than *I'VE* ever gotten! *shakes fist* and Ive been here way longer than you (yeah, a year, lol!) i am also mikae77 thats why.

but anyway, AMAZING poem. really. the first couple of stanzas were kind of boring but as I read along, it got so much better! Keep it up! *cheers*

arigato for reading my work. ja mata!
4/30/2003 c1 68Princess Mulan
A very good messagw. I like it a lot.

The blood and darkness has a really good effect!

good job!
4/30/2003 c1 16AnnekeRose
Wow, that was really good. Better then other poetry on the site that I've read so far. I was expecting a different sort of ending, but it was still good. (Oh and thanks for the reviews on my poems)
4/29/2003 c1 15Isay
Very deep! Nice... it makes me think.

~Isay
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