for Truth Found Out6/26/2004 c5 Brie
HEY! That’s not fair! What is gonna happen to Jeremy and the minister and his daughter! You can’t leave me hanging like this! Keep it coming. It’s GREAT! Another good one by you!
Brie
HEY! That’s not fair! What is gonna happen to Jeremy and the minister and his daughter! You can’t leave me hanging like this! Keep it coming. It’s GREAT! Another good one by you!
Brie
3/9/2004 c5 
39TabusVakarian
*gasps in shock* How could I have not noticed before today that you had updated?
OH! I hate cliffy's! You better update soon, I wanna know what happens. I like this minister guyy, he seems cool.
39TabusVakarian*gasps in shock* How could I have not noticed before today that you had updated?
OH! I hate cliffy's! You better update soon, I wanna know what happens. I like this minister guyy, he seems cool.
1/3/2004 c5 kt
pleasw write more, I want to know more about this, dude minister. and why's he traveling alone, with his daughter? :P if you want reviews u need to write!
-Kt
pleasw write more, I want to know more about this, dude minister. and why's he traveling alone, with his daughter? :P if you want reviews u need to write!
-Kt
1/2/2004 c5 Brenden
I'm loving this chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
I'm loving this chapter, can't wait to see what happens next.
12/15/2003 c4 KT
looks good so far...keep going..im a little curious :P
looks good so far...keep going..im a little curious :P
9/21/2003 c4 39TabusVakarian
Well, you've still got me hooked, even moreso than before. I can't wait for your next update ^_^
39TabusVakarianWell, you've still got me hooked, even moreso than before. I can't wait for your next update ^_^
9/20/2003 c4 15lilitaliandragon
oh that's beautiful!
but...not very much like a boy's pov...not in my opinion anyway...
15lilitaliandragonoh that's beautiful!
but...not very much like a boy's pov...not in my opinion anyway...
9/20/2003 c4 Brenden
This is a good chapter. I'd say it was worth the wait.
This is a good chapter. I'd say it was worth the wait.
6/15/2003 c3 kt
hey...this is getting pretty good. keep up doing the good job!
hey...this is getting pretty good. keep up doing the good job!
5/30/2003 c1 MoonLiTe Mist
This story... I admit is very interesting. It keeps you hooked, and that is always a plus. But I think that you should explain how he got into that situation. Why is he killing that man? How did he kill his father? WHO IS JEREMY, ANYWAY? Go into details. Explain how the situation started. It makes things so much clearer for your audiences. And one more thing. That mother of his... belongs in a mental insitution. Loving one minute, kicking him out and threating him the next? Crazy? Oh, I believe so. And in the most recent chapter... That Charles guy... is he the one who Jeremy tries to kill? It's a little unrealistic that he hates him and then goes to him for guidence so quickly afterwards. And I thought that Charles was a glum chum. But he seems perfectly content with what's-her-face. Try to clear things up more. Description is always a plus, as well as personality traits. Love your emotions. Makes you be in the narator's position. Definately update!
This story... I admit is very interesting. It keeps you hooked, and that is always a plus. But I think that you should explain how he got into that situation. Why is he killing that man? How did he kill his father? WHO IS JEREMY, ANYWAY? Go into details. Explain how the situation started. It makes things so much clearer for your audiences. And one more thing. That mother of his... belongs in a mental insitution. Loving one minute, kicking him out and threating him the next? Crazy? Oh, I believe so. And in the most recent chapter... That Charles guy... is he the one who Jeremy tries to kill? It's a little unrealistic that he hates him and then goes to him for guidence so quickly afterwards. And I thought that Charles was a glum chum. But he seems perfectly content with what's-her-face. Try to clear things up more. Description is always a plus, as well as personality traits. Love your emotions. Makes you be in the narator's position. Definately update!
5/28/2003 c3 Spike Highwind too lazy to login
It's really interesting. Though his mom's a psycho and scares me. Write more!
It's really interesting. Though his mom's a psycho and scares me. Write more!
5/22/2003 c3 22tortured dragon
this is a great beginning though its kinda confusing nice details ill be sure to check for more chapters
22tortured dragonthis is a great beginning though its kinda confusing nice details ill be sure to check for more chapters