for Tears In The Rain4/16/2004 c1 
7psychelock
nice poem-so full of emotion.
"i stand by myself in the rain
so no one can tell apart the pain" - i really loved that line. xD
7psychelocknice poem-so full of emotion.
"i stand by myself in the rain
so no one can tell apart the pain" - i really loved that line. xD
9/8/2003 c1 3Renn
*_*...wah. Beautiful. I so love the rain and poems telling of the feelings it brings, especially angst poems...
3Renn*_*...wah. Beautiful. I so love the rain and poems telling of the feelings it brings, especially angst poems...
4/18/2003 c1 25Blue6-Blood66
wah nice, nice, nice! I love the rhymes, waah it's just so emotional... *sniff* I like the last two lines especially. good job, indeed.
25Blue6-Blood66wah nice, nice, nice! I love the rhymes, waah it's just so emotional... *sniff* I like the last two lines especially. good job, indeed.
4/17/2003 c1 102firemounrain
-from the raindrops.
yes.
i like it when the last phrase is unsaid, and it comes from the reader's mouth instead of yours.
102firemounrain-from the raindrops.
yes.
i like it when the last phrase is unsaid, and it comes from the reader's mouth instead of yours.
4/17/2003 c1 greenbug67 too lazy to log in
Good poem. I like it. :)
Good poem. I like it. :)
4/17/2003 c1 nameless face
...i like..."yet i don't want to get out of this mess"...strange isn't it how people can turn our lives upside down but still we don't want to leave them...this is all really good
...i like..."yet i don't want to get out of this mess"...strange isn't it how people can turn our lives upside down but still we don't want to leave them...this is all really good