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6/21/2003 c1 33Aurora Barrett
I like that a lot... in a weird, odd way... hm... I like ur writing style...

~Aurora Barrett~
6/8/2003 c1 9JBJ 18
nice job, like this one alot
5/31/2003 c1 4phillie
That is a great poem. It is very emotional although those were great choices of words. Overall Great Great Great!
5/6/2003 c1 2Shaun O'Rourke
freaky thought... dying since the day you were born. living for death is ironic, but some may argue that life is the most painful part of death... any other cliches you want me to throw at you, just ask.
4/24/2003 c1 13Horace Gold
Prima! excellent choice of words, and great imagery created with things like 'portal' very eerie...

Vellicito del dio e di buona notte,

Lazarus de Medci IV
4/19/2003 c1 56Blue SunriZe
This poem is so true. Nice job. When you can, please come review some of my writings.

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