for The Jock and the Bookworm5/22/2004 c13 LaUrEn
hehe nice story...
hehe nice story...
9/27/2003 c14 JULI-THE-AWESOME-AMAZING-INTERESTINGISH-INDIVIDUALISTIC-PERSON-THAT-DIDN'T-MAKE-JAZZ-BAND-CUZ-SHE-WAS-A-GIRL-AND-MR.-BURGER-IS-POOPY-MAYBE-I-SHOULD-CHANGE-MY-PENNAME-TO-THIS-LOL-OKAY-I'LL-STOP-NOW-BYE
HI! Okay, this is in response to the last review you wrote yourself for this story.
Okay. Here it goes. ::takes deep breath::
I AM IN SIXTH GRADE, MADDIE, AND I WOULD NEVER, EVER NOT IN A MILLION YEARS TELL SOMEONE OUTSIDE OF MY FAMILY THAT I LOVED THEM AS MORE THAN A FRIEND! I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT EVEN FOR A *LITTLE WHILE* BRIAN AND ALYSSA WERE IN SIXTH GRADE! UGH! :P :P :P :P :P :P
Bob: Sorry about that. Sonia slept over last night, they got high on sour punch straws, and spent the majority of the night making fun of fourth graders.
James: What're you looking at me for? It's true!
Okay, I gotses to go now, but maybe you can come over this weekend or something... BYE!
El uno y unico *!Juli!*
HI! Okay, this is in response to the last review you wrote yourself for this story.
Okay. Here it goes. ::takes deep breath::
I AM IN SIXTH GRADE, MADDIE, AND I WOULD NEVER, EVER NOT IN A MILLION YEARS TELL SOMEONE OUTSIDE OF MY FAMILY THAT I LOVED THEM AS MORE THAN A FRIEND! I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT EVEN FOR A *LITTLE WHILE* BRIAN AND ALYSSA WERE IN SIXTH GRADE! UGH! :P :P :P :P :P :P
Bob: Sorry about that. Sonia slept over last night, they got high on sour punch straws, and spent the majority of the night making fun of fourth graders.
James: What're you looking at me for? It's true!
Okay, I gotses to go now, but maybe you can come over this weekend or something... BYE!
El uno y unico *!Juli!*
8/26/2003 c14 
12Smiley Gurl 1019
Well, I liked my romance, even if *COUGH, HACK* JULI *HACK, COUGH* didn't.
The romance was a little too big for sixth graders, so I changed it to eighth graders. You like? Me like.
12Smiley Gurl 1019Well, I liked my romance, even if *COUGH, HACK* JULI *HACK, COUGH* didn't.
The romance was a little too big for sixth graders, so I changed it to eighth graders. You like? Me like.
8/23/2003 c14 1Raven of the Tower
ew. I mean, it's very good, for a romance, it's just gross. Really gross. But it's very good. For a romance. By the way, you've broken my record. You have more words, chapters, and pages on this than I did on CtW. If you even remember what that is. :)
El uno y unico Juli
1Raven of the Towerew. I mean, it's very good, for a romance, it's just gross. Really gross. But it's very good. For a romance. By the way, you've broken my record. You have more words, chapters, and pages on this than I did on CtW. If you even remember what that is. :)
El uno y unico Juli
8/9/2003 c14 8br0kEnInNoseNce
ahhaaw... how cute! lol sorry i havent been reviewing in awhile.. i hadnt got around to checking fictionpress... heh... but its so cute! lol update soon!
j[a]y[n]e
8br0kEnInNoseNceahhaaw... how cute! lol sorry i havent been reviewing in awhile.. i hadnt got around to checking fictionpress... heh... but its so cute! lol update soon!
j[a]y[n]e
7/30/2003 c14 passion101
well I am NO antiromantic at all, what so ever, so bring on the romantic stuff! lol
well I am NO antiromantic at all, what so ever, so bring on the romantic stuff! lol
7/29/2003 c14 Mina Carlisle
When I got done I was expecting there to be a chapter 15 ready for me to read. But gah, there isn't. I hope there will be one sometime soon? I like this story, it's rather interesting, and I don't see why people would hate it. So the chapters are short, big deal not everything has to be long. I loved reading this story and I hope they get out of the mountains. By the way, what state are they in? That might help some, not that its a big deal or anything, I was just wondering because the Appalacian Mountains start in Georgia and go up to New York. I'm just curious. Waiting patiently for chapter 15, Lady M.
When I got done I was expecting there to be a chapter 15 ready for me to read. But gah, there isn't. I hope there will be one sometime soon? I like this story, it's rather interesting, and I don't see why people would hate it. So the chapters are short, big deal not everything has to be long. I loved reading this story and I hope they get out of the mountains. By the way, what state are they in? That might help some, not that its a big deal or anything, I was just wondering because the Appalacian Mountains start in Georgia and go up to New York. I'm just curious. Waiting patiently for chapter 15, Lady M.
7/28/2003 c9 1Raven of the Tower
Ew. Gross. But GOOD.
I have a suggestion. Switch POVs in the chapters instead of making lots of long, short chapters. Less agonizing for your adoring fans.
-Juli
1Raven of the TowerEw. Gross. But GOOD.
I have a suggestion. Switch POVs in the chapters instead of making lots of long, short chapters. Less agonizing for your adoring fans.
-Juli
6/24/2003 c7 8br0kEnInNoseNce
o... interesting... they should hook up.. haha thatd be cute... thats really sad all their classmates died.. and ew! brian picked up a hand! lol.. newho0z... UPDATE!
-jayne
8br0kEnInNoseNceo... interesting... they should hook up.. haha thatd be cute... thats really sad all their classmates died.. and ew! brian picked up a hand! lol.. newho0z... UPDATE!
-jayne
6/1/2003 c7 1Raven of the Tower
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1Raven of the TowerHI!
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CONTINUE, PLEASE!
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5/25/2003 c5 Amethyst Mage
Good story! Continue!
If you can't post new chapters at a rate that pleases me because you have homework, tell your teachers that you made a commitment to your loving fans on fp.net and you are simply too talented to waste your time doing something as frivolous as homework!
Plz write more ASAP!
- Jess (Amethyst Mage)
P.S. What happened to Teamo Supremo? I liked that!
Good story! Continue!
If you can't post new chapters at a rate that pleases me because you have homework, tell your teachers that you made a commitment to your loving fans on fp.net and you are simply too talented to waste your time doing something as frivolous as homework!
Plz write more ASAP!
- Jess (Amethyst Mage)
P.S. What happened to Teamo Supremo? I liked that!
5/18/2003 c5 Maddie
Thank you guys SO much for reviewing! I seriously didn't think that many people would like this... You are the best!
Jennia - You are good! Plot twists there will be... Like Yoda from Star Wars I sound...
Brian's next chapter is on the way!
Luv ya lots!
~Maddie~
Thank you guys SO much for reviewing! I seriously didn't think that many people would like this... You are the best!
Jennia - You are good! Plot twists there will be... Like Yoda from Star Wars I sound...
Brian's next chapter is on the way!
Luv ya lots!
~Maddie~
5/18/2003 c5 Jennia
and the plot thickens...
can i predict the story?
alyssa and brian fight at first because of their social differences. then they eventually become friends, brian is the brawn and alyssa is the brains which help them survive, they start to like each other and the finally they find there way out. the end.
providing some twists to the story...
so am i right? please?
and the plot thickens...
can i predict the story?
alyssa and brian fight at first because of their social differences. then they eventually become friends, brian is the brawn and alyssa is the brains which help them survive, they start to like each other and the finally they find there way out. the end.
providing some twists to the story...
so am i right? please?
5/17/2003 c5 8br0kEnInNoseNce
alyssa to the rescue! lol i wunder wut brian will think wen he wakes up...
|*|jayne|*|
8br0kEnInNoseNcealyssa to the rescue! lol i wunder wut brian will think wen he wakes up...
|*|jayne|*|