for Going Under8/3/2003 c1 
2Katiya Kramer
It is always these child abuse stories I like. I feel sorry for Karissa. Update soon.
2Katiya KramerIt is always these child abuse stories I like. I feel sorry for Karissa. Update soon.
7/10/2003 c2 16kaika switched
Her life sucked, but it's all in the past, for now. I'm glad she's at some place nice, hopefully with good people who will treat her right. Keep writing!
16kaika switchedHer life sucked, but it's all in the past, for now. I'm glad she's at some place nice, hopefully with good people who will treat her right. Keep writing!
6/29/2003 c2 7enchanted muse
yay, fictionpress isn't being dumb anymore... anyway, this was so depressing! I had tears in my eyes after reading it. Lauren, you're such a talented writer! This will be a really good story, I can feel it. Keep up your brilliant work as always!
7enchanted museyay, fictionpress isn't being dumb anymore... anyway, this was so depressing! I had tears in my eyes after reading it. Lauren, you're such a talented writer! This will be a really good story, I can feel it. Keep up your brilliant work as always!
6/29/2003 c2 28RatherFresh
MWAHAHAHA!
LollerZ, I LOVE this story. Honestly.. Even though it's just starting out, I think it's one of your best stories. I swear.. It's just that good! Of course, YOU KNOW which story is my favorite, but we'll save that topic of conversation for later.
About the story: you were right. The style was a little different than it usually is. But to tell you the truth, I like it. It's good. You made the whole thing seem so real. I was seriously almost scared! Your descriptions were perfect and there are hardly any grammatical errors. Definitely one of your best stories so far.
This chapter was good. It DIDN'T suck! Update soon!
LuvZ,
~E~
28RatherFreshMWAHAHAHA!
LollerZ, I LOVE this story. Honestly.. Even though it's just starting out, I think it's one of your best stories. I swear.. It's just that good! Of course, YOU KNOW which story is my favorite, but we'll save that topic of conversation for later.
About the story: you were right. The style was a little different than it usually is. But to tell you the truth, I like it. It's good. You made the whole thing seem so real. I was seriously almost scared! Your descriptions were perfect and there are hardly any grammatical errors. Definitely one of your best stories so far.
This chapter was good. It DIDN'T suck! Update soon!
LuvZ,
~E~
4/20/2003 c1 7enchanted muse
As usual, you did it again with an awesome storyline! This story definitely has a LOT of potential, and being the brilliant author you are, I KNOW it'll turn out great! I can't wait for the story to start! Keep up the great work!
7enchanted museAs usual, you did it again with an awesome storyline! This story definitely has a LOT of potential, and being the brilliant author you are, I KNOW it'll turn out great! I can't wait for the story to start! Keep up the great work!
4/19/2003 c1 erzulie
LAUREN!
Okay, I have SO many things to say about this story. I guess I have to pick a place to start, so here it is...
1) IT'S REALLY GOOD! Yup, I had three people reading it at the same time, and Leigh was complaining when I scrolled down because he's as fast as a turtle when it comes to reading. And my sister was standing behind me, reading it, and I didn't know. But guess what... SHE LIKES IT TOO! So extra kudos there, cause she doesn't like much of anything. She just loves to be difficult.
2) This happens to be a very good plot. So far... LoL. But I think you could really go places with this story, Laur! It's really good, so far, and it's only the first chapter! The good stories always pull you in at the very beginning. And since this one caught me (hook, line, and sinker) I'd say that this story is pretty damn good!
3) Very few mistakes... LoL. Joe would be extremely proud. I decided not to let him read it, mostly because of the subject matter. I don't really know how he'd react. I mean, he reads a lot lately, but some things still make him jumpy. So I'm just playing it safe for now. And I'm REALLY impressed with this story. Maybe you could turn it into a novel and become one of those "New York Times Bestselling Authors"! That would be REALLY cool. Anyway, GREAT JOB! I'll be waiting for the next chapter... So try and update soon!
Luvz,
~E~
P.S. I'm STILL impressed!
LAUREN!
Okay, I have SO many things to say about this story. I guess I have to pick a place to start, so here it is...
1) IT'S REALLY GOOD! Yup, I had three people reading it at the same time, and Leigh was complaining when I scrolled down because he's as fast as a turtle when it comes to reading. And my sister was standing behind me, reading it, and I didn't know. But guess what... SHE LIKES IT TOO! So extra kudos there, cause she doesn't like much of anything. She just loves to be difficult.
2) This happens to be a very good plot. So far... LoL. But I think you could really go places with this story, Laur! It's really good, so far, and it's only the first chapter! The good stories always pull you in at the very beginning. And since this one caught me (hook, line, and sinker) I'd say that this story is pretty damn good!
3) Very few mistakes... LoL. Joe would be extremely proud. I decided not to let him read it, mostly because of the subject matter. I don't really know how he'd react. I mean, he reads a lot lately, but some things still make him jumpy. So I'm just playing it safe for now. And I'm REALLY impressed with this story. Maybe you could turn it into a novel and become one of those "New York Times Bestselling Authors"! That would be REALLY cool. Anyway, GREAT JOB! I'll be waiting for the next chapter... So try and update soon!
Luvz,
~E~
P.S. I'm STILL impressed!
4/19/2003 c1 16kaika switched
A very lovely introductory chapter. Like you said, a lot of unanswered things, but you'll clear that up. I look forward to reading more chapters of this story. Keep writing!
16kaika switchedA very lovely introductory chapter. Like you said, a lot of unanswered things, but you'll clear that up. I look forward to reading more chapters of this story. Keep writing!
4/19/2003 c1 anna elise
wow this is so good! i'm suprised you don't have like 50 reviews for it already. i'll be back to read more!
wow this is so good! i'm suprised you don't have like 50 reviews for it already. i'll be back to read more!