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7/24/2003 c1 53Punky Monkey
Well this is a bit rubbish really isnt it. wats the point of posting such crap. You sed my mates poety was crap so i decided to look at ur stuff to see why you'd sed tht. And yours is worse than his! So maybe next time you should say 'in my opinion i dont like the way you express certain things' instead of telling people you hate it. Its not fair.
4/24/2003 c1 123Tristen
Very Short. Not much Feeling in it, but its written well. If you expand on it, it may come out better than it did here... I like some of your other poetry better, Keep up the good work..

4/20/2003 c1 68Princess Mulan
nice wordings

I like the idea

great writing

Happy Easter
4/19/2003 c1 36Psycho-kyugurl
Nice one. ^.-
4/19/2003 c1 H. M. Banson
Hmm, cooli! I liked it, and it was cool to have the contrast there and stuff, the optimist/pessimist.

good job as usual *g*


4/19/2003 c1 7Fortissamo
Terse, yet neat antithesis thingie... Uh, Timber should make cobweb a member, and erm... where's Alethea been, you know? Blackforest has been quiet lately... too quiet... sorreh, this was about the poem, right? Yes, nice. *gives thumbs up*

~The notorious forteforte

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4/19/2003 c1 100Keep it 100
Cool contrast.

~Heart of the Sword

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