
1/6/2011 c1 downforthecount
I thought you did a very good job setting up the gods and goddesses. A very old, mythological feel. Very nice.
I thought you did a very good job setting up the gods and goddesses. A very old, mythological feel. Very nice.
1/4/2010 c1 wikki
Any chance this story will be picked up? Since t was done kind of long ago? I would love to read more!
Any chance this story will be picked up? Since t was done kind of long ago? I would love to read more!
3/11/2007 c1 i-see-faeries
Aw, this seems so good. The choppy storytelling makes it hard to understand, but the plot seems promising. You've introduced a lot of characters, and I'd like to see where you go with this. Loves and update soon! ^^
Aw, this seems so good. The choppy storytelling makes it hard to understand, but the plot seems promising. You've introduced a lot of characters, and I'd like to see where you go with this. Loves and update soon! ^^
7/15/2006 c1
31emptyword
The writing in the excerpts reminds me strongly of The Silmarillion by Tolkein (though the language here is by far easier to read). You're not about to create a world like Middle Earth now, are you? ;) Actually, there are notable differences. Your "gods" are much kinder, for one. You have a very intriguing set-up and write very well. I'm interested, without a doubt!

The writing in the excerpts reminds me strongly of The Silmarillion by Tolkein (though the language here is by far easier to read). You're not about to create a world like Middle Earth now, are you? ;) Actually, there are notable differences. Your "gods" are much kinder, for one. You have a very intriguing set-up and write very well. I'm interested, without a doubt!
1/5/2005 c1 Shadowflame
This is great. I could see this being published if your work continues to be as good as it seems to be from this chapter.
This is great. I could see this being published if your work continues to be as good as it seems to be from this chapter.
11/7/2004 c1 Achika
Ne! I love it! Continue!
Ne! I love it! Continue!
4/15/2004 c1
10Cinaed Born Of Fire
Oh wow... I'm almost speechless. This is a fascinating story! You subtly give us readers tidbits of precious information until we're so ensnared that we /have/ to keep reading! I really hope you update this story soon. You have a flair that I haven't seen in many at FictionPress, and I'll be waiting to see how you continue this marvelous and intriguing plot.
~Cinaed

Oh wow... I'm almost speechless. This is a fascinating story! You subtly give us readers tidbits of precious information until we're so ensnared that we /have/ to keep reading! I really hope you update this story soon. You have a flair that I haven't seen in many at FictionPress, and I'll be waiting to see how you continue this marvelous and intriguing plot.
~Cinaed
11/10/2003 c1 Rae
You know, this would have been a really great NaNo piece. ^_^ *grins* I like it, so far. I'll read the first chapter tomorrow or Wednesday.
You know, this would have been a really great NaNo piece. ^_^ *grins* I like it, so far. I'll read the first chapter tomorrow or Wednesday.
9/28/2003 c1
1Rhys
I can't believe this story doesn't have more reviews...its fantastic! I'm so incredibly curious to know what's going to happen next, and with your kind of mythical style and excellent description, its really a joy to read. Please continue!

I can't believe this story doesn't have more reviews...its fantastic! I'm so incredibly curious to know what's going to happen next, and with your kind of mythical style and excellent description, its really a joy to read. Please continue!
8/8/2003 c1
31kalmia raphael
i am DEFINITELY interested. although things are a bit hard to understand at this point. it spunds very, very promising though.

i am DEFINITELY interested. although things are a bit hard to understand at this point. it spunds very, very promising though.
4/27/2003 c1 Rosestoo
Of course people are interested! I am at least and I'm sure others are to. Keep writing, I can't wait to see what you do with your characters and world.
Of course people are interested! I am at least and I'm sure others are to. Keep writing, I can't wait to see what you do with your characters and world.
4/20/2003 c1
29Autumn tears
Ah! I love it! I'm more than a little dazed and confused but hopefully everything will clear up. PLEASE write more!

Ah! I love it! I'm more than a little dazed and confused but hopefully everything will clear up. PLEASE write more!
4/20/2003 c1 alexa braun
Confusing, but I'm sure that's just because it's a prologue. And it's a *great* prologue.
You have an amazing mind; I love how you can come up with stuff like this. It's original and interesting.
I can't wait to see more of the characters. Characters are, after all, the best thing about a fic. ^_^ And I can already tell this will be fun.
~ D-chan
Confusing, but I'm sure that's just because it's a prologue. And it's a *great* prologue.
You have an amazing mind; I love how you can come up with stuff like this. It's original and interesting.
I can't wait to see more of the characters. Characters are, after all, the best thing about a fic. ^_^ And I can already tell this will be fun.
~ D-chan