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11/1/2005 c1 10siopilos
an appropriate way of describing life. this gives me a message that no one will be stuck in a certain state for long. like the seasons that change, so will us in an ever changing cycle that is life ;)
6/4/2003 c1 2blinkie
excellent portrayal of the seasons. i liked winter the best. the despair is heartbreaking. keep writing, you know how i read this? i found it on the favorite authors list of lisette jester. ^_^

blinkie
5/18/2003 c1 7mary.rose.fate
i'll put this in my fav.
4/24/2003 c1 23Fina Arvanthol
I'm not sure if this is a diamonte or not. I took a poetry class about two years ago and I think they are because they sound like diamontes. They are really good! I like them a lot! Good job!

-Gamer GX
4/23/2003 c1 LisetteJester
I finally realized what I hate most about poems. They always seemed forced. Like you have to try to make it fit the way you want it. You don't have that.

Also, I think you must be some kind of muse because reading this stuff that I could not possibly write give ideas about what I can write.
4/20/2003 c1 26kamikaze899
loved it!
4/20/2003 c1 17Alyna
That was a great poem, really original, and I just loved it. wish I could write like you! hehe keep it up
4/20/2003 c1 Needa S
Awesome! K/Writing..

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