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9/5/2003 c1 opper
there really is a poem called whatif... yes i spelled it right... urs is better than the one i read in skool, tho
5/6/2003 c1 68Princess Mulan
I like this kind of format you use, repeating the first words in your sentense, the poem leave a very strong impression this way.

I like all the questions you asked here ,too. Make the poem philiosophyical. You did a wonderful job here again.

We should take our chnaces in life! ^_^
4/23/2003 c1 Traced In Green
This is brilliant. That's all I can say.


4/23/2003 c1 13RedLady
HAH HAH! This poem makes me laugh because I know some people who are actually like that, those who get pleasure from pain and such... how ironic is that?

I was once asked to write about what the greatest thing in the world would be. I said the greatest thing in the would be if we didn't have to think about what the greatest thing in the world would be because it would be perfect therefore distinguishing all "what ifs" in the world. Other people said world peace and love and such. I admired the one guy who said the greatest thing in the world would be if pigs could fly and then he could go out with all the girls who turned him down using that phrase. -_-
4/20/2003 c1 146Catella Estelle
What if...Hm. An ever popular poem subject. ^_~

Great work! I loved it!

Truly makes you think.

Keep up the awesome writing!

~ LIttle Dog Muse

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