
5/18/2003 c1
35Mime
A funny haiku. Sweets are very welcoming, but you have to make sure you don't eat too much!

A funny haiku. Sweets are very welcoming, but you have to make sure you don't eat too much!
5/7/2003 c1
72CancerianQueen
*lol* That's really weird and funny! :) I like it. But... a haiku?
Keep writing,
Vnomi. ;)

*lol* That's really weird and funny! :) I like it. But... a haiku?
Keep writing,
Vnomi. ;)
5/6/2003 c1 That One Bunny Chick
Wait...eat too much? Is that possible? Well, great job all the same! Keep writing!
Me
Wait...eat too much? Is that possible? Well, great job all the same! Keep writing!
Me
5/1/2003 c1
28soulspring
hahaha. definitely a humorous piece. i love the childish innocence in it. :)!

hahaha. definitely a humorous piece. i love the childish innocence in it. :)!
4/30/2003 c1
11midnight dreams
:P that's gotta be one of the cutest haikus i've read. *giggles* Great job.

:P that's gotta be one of the cutest haikus i've read. *giggles* Great job.