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10/13/2003 c1 27Krashbandit333
Hey, this poem is really good. I love the paradox's used and the idea of "slipping" is unique. I read a lot of your stuff and you're very very good! I thought I'd review once because I'm in a rush but you're very good and I enjoy your work enormously!
7/3/2003 c1 3cinnamin girl
sometimes i feel like i'm slipping.. life is completley pointless and you're getting nowhere but things are still flying by you and you cant keep up...
4/21/2003 c1 3FishFromOuterSpace
that was good.
4/21/2003 c1 8EBS
That was very beautiful, yet sad. Sometimes I feel like that as well, but your never alone; not while I'm around. Don't ever believe your alone. It does feel like that,(well at least my depression feels like that)You feel as if you want to fall and you want no one to catch you.

This was very beautiful, and you have a very gifted personality. You're a wonderful person with such a beautiful spirit. I'm amazed by you.

Write me an email! Bye!

Yours,

Irish Princess
4/21/2003 c1 11nein-oRiginal
I'm not really sure what it's about...depression i suppose, but it's very beautiful.
4/21/2003 c1 1Pound
hey cool!

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