for Death2/25/2004 c1 MissChiaroscuro
hey, this one's good. can i use it in school when they make us write haikus?
1)i don't profit *money* from it. just a grade.
2) im jst kidding! :)
hey, this one's good. can i use it in school when they make us write haikus?
1)i don't profit *money* from it. just a grade.
2) im jst kidding! :)
10/26/2003 c3 
13StarlightWarrior
Wow. These are good. I love the theme and atmosphere created by the haiku's brevity. :)
13StarlightWarriorWow. These are good. I love the theme and atmosphere created by the haiku's brevity. :)
10/17/2003 c3 28Crimson Scythe
Nice haikus. It's sad to think that the answer to that question could be no. Hopefully, we are lucky enough to have someone who cares enough to remember us and place flowers upon our graves after time has passed. ~Crimson Scythe (Lanti Arlit)
28Crimson ScytheNice haikus. It's sad to think that the answer to that question could be no. Hopefully, we are lucky enough to have someone who cares enough to remember us and place flowers upon our graves after time has passed. ~Crimson Scythe (Lanti Arlit)
9/7/2003 c1 19gellar the third
beautiful! nicely done. join inkwell kaya...
ever yours,
[unsure whether im sampa or adelfa]
19gellar the thirdbeautiful! nicely done. join inkwell kaya...
ever yours,
[unsure whether im sampa or adelfa]
7/9/2003 c3 16Morde Tempest
Review number fifty! *Throws confetti* Wonderfully done haikus! :) My favorite type of poem. I should try them more often. I haven't done them since I was eight. Great job!
16Morde TempestReview number fifty! *Throws confetti* Wonderfully done haikus! :) My favorite type of poem. I should try them more often. I haven't done them since I was eight. Great job!
7/7/2003 c3 127godawful teen-angst poetry
yeah, it is sad. I'm sure someone will remember you though...*if* you ever die, of course...lol
127godawful teen-angst poetryyeah, it is sad. I'm sure someone will remember you though...*if* you ever die, of course...lol
7/6/2003 c3 106cosmo-queen
A very meaningful set of haikus you have here about death. It's a very thought-provoking concept and you express your ideas well. Concerning the last haiku, I have asked that question before. The first two are very good descriptions too. Whether they're right, I have yet to find out ;) Great work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
106cosmo-queenA very meaningful set of haikus you have here about death. It's a very thought-provoking concept and you express your ideas well. Concerning the last haiku, I have asked that question before. The first two are very good descriptions too. Whether they're right, I have yet to find out ;) Great work, keep writing :)
*cosmo-queen*
5/30/2003 c3 128Zainab
Yes it is. Good one. The second one's the best. You should write a series of haikus on witchcraft or something. I don't know if you did that already or not..I'll go check...
128ZainabYes it is. Good one. The second one's the best. You should write a series of haikus on witchcraft or something. I don't know if you did that already or not..I'll go check...
5/30/2003 c2 Zainab
This one's better than the last. "We no longer notice when We no longer breathe." That's cool
This one's better than the last. "We no longer notice when We no longer breathe." That's cool
5/30/2003 c1 Zainab
Brian Froud refers to death as a she. You should read the book, it's good stuff. Anyways, I like how this haiku flows.
Brian Froud refers to death as a she. You should read the book, it's good stuff. Anyways, I like how this haiku flows.
5/29/2003 c3 267Lady B.V Rose
true that true that. When I die all shall celebrate...because the evil pink bunny sandwiches command it so! *dies and plays BOTH her funeral songs "Celebration" by Kool and the gang and "The Day I Die" by Good Charlotte* I know i'm demented ^^;
"I am the game, don't try to play me coz you'll just get game OVER!" - Me
x Nicole x
267Lady B.V Rosetrue that true that. When I die all shall celebrate...because the evil pink bunny sandwiches command it so! *dies and plays BOTH her funeral songs "Celebration" by Kool and the gang and "The Day I Die" by Good Charlotte* I know i'm demented ^^;
"I am the game, don't try to play me coz you'll just get game OVER!" - Me
x Nicole x
5/17/2003 c3 16kaika switched
This is a really nice collection of Haiku here. You're able to describe your feelings of death in so few words so well. Keep writing!
16kaika switchedThis is a really nice collection of Haiku here. You're able to describe your feelings of death in so few words so well. Keep writing!