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8/9/2015 c1 8vampirefang999
Nice :)
4/19/2008 c2 1xX-Bella-Xx
Wow! I LOVE your story! Great writing!

Could you do me a favour and review my high-school vampire story? I would be so grateful if you did!

Thanks,



♥ Bella ♥

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3/3/2006 c3 3Heart of the Blood Drinker
I can almost sympathize with Claudia... I've hurt my friends nearly to that point by leaving... But I'm coming back, and they know it... ANYway, its a great story. I love your idea of vampire culture- and I hope there's more to this.
10/9/2005 c3 MeredithBlueEyes
Great story so far! I love your descriptions and setting. Keep up the good work!

Emerald :)
9/2/2004 c3 Ridea
wow...it's really good and i feel so sorry for Mandy...can't wait to read the next part...lol
5/26/2004 c3 2PunkRockFlames
that was varrie god. i liked it. update soon1
5/10/2004 c3 6Nighttime Wanderer
I like it, pelase read my story It Will SUrely Come To Pass ((it is about vampires))
1/27/2004 c1 Nicolette Singholiov
I really really really liked it! Continue this until our protagonist attains aduldhood!
8/22/2003 c3 10Faith Teigra
I just have to say that I love your writing style, especially how you write about emotions. Such an addictive story!
8/15/2003 c3 4gaelicWizard
superb, wonderful, addicting even. iLike it very much, please keep writing. iHope that Claudia's and Lee's relationship can blossom.

JP
7/22/2003 c3 kimoniken
I really like the story and I hate that sarah ! Isn't it ironic that one of my two best friends names is sarah?
4/10/2002 c3 29Katterree Fengari
...OOOOo...pay their respects, is she gonna say something to Sarah? I hope she does, u made Sarah sorta like the bad guy. Good story, Continue! O, what if she goes back to her new town and finds a vampire who is fine with killing, but hates being a vampire, or being different...and wants to be human, or somethin? just a thought, Continue
4/10/2002 c1 Katterree Fengari
Oo! Good story, I like the part of predators and prey, that would help her feel better, but I can guess that later, if u make it a romance, she'll fall in love with a human, then she might have to kill him, or some angst, but if u don't then she'll find a human and stuff, and then see them as something other than prey and feel empty and sorry for killing,

or u just keep going with her life, and keep it simple for a while, explaining more about what she does on a daily bases, before having something happen

(behold, this is what I guess might happen in a story with such a beginning!)
4/30/2001 c3 14WillingToFight
that's really good...you planning on writing more? I've never read a vampire story before...but I like it!
4/19/2001 c3 6Michael O'Hare
Very tragic chapter. You did a wonderful job of showing the characters' pained emotions. I certainly hope someone at least trys to call Sarah out on the treatment of her late sister, regardless of how seriously it will be taken. I'm happy to see that this story is continuing, by the way.
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