for The Ancient Butterfly Dance2/3/2004 c1 
14arbysauce93
Wow. You use absolutely beautiful imagery and words and figurative language in this. I am in awe. It is a sad poem, but you still describe it so beautifully the feelings don't break through until after you start thinking about it. I had to read this over. It is incredible. I love the part about the Russian Easter Egg. You have beautiful work. I wish that you would write more!
14arbysauce93Wow. You use absolutely beautiful imagery and words and figurative language in this. I am in awe. It is a sad poem, but you still describe it so beautifully the feelings don't break through until after you start thinking about it. I had to read this over. It is incredible. I love the part about the Russian Easter Egg. You have beautiful work. I wish that you would write more!
1/21/2004 c1 57teh tarik
Wow, this one was awesome! I loved reading it aloud, and certain lines really left an impact on me.
*Flirtations fanced between us*
*Like straying giggles in the afternoon*
This is one beautiful piece, and I love the way how you expressed so much feeling in it. Great work.
57teh tarikWow, this one was awesome! I loved reading it aloud, and certain lines really left an impact on me.
*Flirtations fanced between us*
*Like straying giggles in the afternoon*
This is one beautiful piece, and I love the way how you expressed so much feeling in it. Great work.
1/12/2004 c1 14Love of hate
Cool. I love how it pulls you and makes you feel like you are the one all happy and in love, then just as easly as it ends you say one line that shows how it can end. The line 'Like tiny golden butterflies Fluttering from heart to heart' Gives me this really cool image and is a way awsome representation. Great pome.
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14Love of hateCool. I love how it pulls you and makes you feel like you are the one all happy and in love, then just as easly as it ends you say one line that shows how it can end. The line 'Like tiny golden butterflies Fluttering from heart to heart' Gives me this really cool image and is a way awsome representation. Great pome.
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12/24/2003 c1 43Carter Tachikawa
A very nice picture you have painted with this poem. The images are lovely. Overall, it's nicely written. Great job, keep writing, and happy holidays.
~CT
43Carter TachikawaA very nice picture you have painted with this poem. The images are lovely. Overall, it's nicely written. Great job, keep writing, and happy holidays.
~CT
12/23/2003 c1 28frugale
This is strangely liberating. Truely, wonderfully liberating. Mostly beautiful. Just ... beautiful ...
28frugaleThis is strangely liberating. Truely, wonderfully liberating. Mostly beautiful. Just ... beautiful ...
11/9/2003 c1 120Heather Montgomery
Very pretty poem. I love the metaphors. I like the lines "Your words were always music notes/ Whispering secrets in my waiting ears" And the metaphor about the russian easter eggs at the end was perfect. Great work!
120Heather MontgomeryVery pretty poem. I love the metaphors. I like the lines "Your words were always music notes/ Whispering secrets in my waiting ears" And the metaphor about the russian easter eggs at the end was perfect. Great work!
11/3/2003 c1 3Tsier-Sightless Blade
This is my first review, so I hope I do this right. I have enjoyed life as much as I can. Your beautiful poem expresses purity and truth of love. A wonderful piece of work. You have my thanks. Take care.
3Tsier-Sightless BladeThis is my first review, so I hope I do this right. I have enjoyed life as much as I can. Your beautiful poem expresses purity and truth of love. A wonderful piece of work. You have my thanks. Take care.
10/31/2003 c1 53Impressionist
ahh...good old butterfly flirtations.
well done, I must say. post more singular poems..they're easier to read. otherwise I'll end up sitting here for hours reading of the multitudes.
ps-you know that Jewel is spelled without the 2 at the end, right?
53Impressionistahh...good old butterfly flirtations.
well done, I must say. post more singular poems..they're easier to read. otherwise I'll end up sitting here for hours reading of the multitudes.
ps-you know that Jewel is spelled without the 2 at the end, right?
9/30/2003 c1 127godawful teen-angst poetry
Oh god-this is gorgeous. I love the last analogy about love and a russian easter egg...but I loved a lot of it. In fact, I loved all of it. Almost every line is just-perfect. This is so-I can't even say. On to the faves list it goes.
~lyv
127godawful teen-angst poetryOh god-this is gorgeous. I love the last analogy about love and a russian easter egg...but I loved a lot of it. In fact, I loved all of it. Almost every line is just-perfect. This is so-I can't even say. On to the faves list it goes.
~lyv
9/26/2003 c1 267Lady B.V Rose
Me no know if there's anything me can say that hasn't already been said!
Its really really beautfully written, in ways I would have never thought of!
5 stars +! ^_~
Love Always and God Bless!
- Nicole xx
267Lady B.V RoseMe no know if there's anything me can say that hasn't already been said!
Its really really beautfully written, in ways I would have never thought of!
5 stars +! ^_~
Love Always and God Bless!
- Nicole xx
9/25/2003 c1 Kasurin
WOW, beautiful imagery and metaphor. It honestly did take my breath my away. Goregeous scenes and emotion. I especially like how something so stirring and beautiful drives someone to the edge of insanity.
WOW, beautiful imagery and metaphor. It honestly did take my breath my away. Goregeous scenes and emotion. I especially like how something so stirring and beautiful drives someone to the edge of insanity.
9/3/2003 c1 53Artemis Astralstar
i love the line, "music notes.. whispering secrets in my waiting ears"
wonderful poem, very sweet and well written,well done!
53Artemis Astralstari love the line, "music notes.. whispering secrets in my waiting ears"
wonderful poem, very sweet and well written,well done!
8/28/2003 c1 42Lady of the Moon
sob, I feel bad now. I liked that a lot. The subtle edge of mystery was wielded very well. I wish I could write nice love poetry like that, but I have no romance life or inspiration whatsoever!
Asta
42Lady of the Moonsob, I feel bad now. I liked that a lot. The subtle edge of mystery was wielded very well. I wish I could write nice love poetry like that, but I have no romance life or inspiration whatsoever!
Asta